Re: [dhcwg] [Errata Held for Document Update] RFC2131 (6618)

Bernie Volz <bevolz@gmail.com> Mon, 30 May 2022 13:05 UTC

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Date: Mon, 30 May 2022 09:05:12 -0400
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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] [Errata Held for Document Update] RFC2131 (6618)
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Yes, this is a known issue with the document although no errata has been filed for it, until now. This is very minor and does not detract from implementing the standard.

- Bernie Volz

> On May 30, 2022, at 1:07 AM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> The following errata report has been held for document update 
> for RFC2131, "Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol". 
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6618
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Status: Held for Document Update
> Type: Editorial
> 
> Reported by: Rubén L.M. <rlm00048@red.ujaen.es>
> Date Reported: 2021-06-22
> Held by: Eric Vyncke (IESG)
> 
> Section: 3.1
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>               Server          Client          Server
>           (not selected)                    (selected)
> 
>                 v               v               v
>                 |               |               |
>                 |     Begins initialization     |
>                 |               |               |
>                 | _____________/|\____________  |
>                 |/DHCPDISCOVER | DHCPDISCOVER  \|
>                 |               |               |
>             Determines          |          Determines
>            configuration        |         configuration
>                 |               |               |
>                 |\             |  ____________/ |
>                 | \________    | /DHCPOFFER     |
>                 | DHCPOFFER\   |/               |
>                 |           \  |                |
>                 |       Collects replies        |
>                 |             \|                |
>                 |     Selects configuration     |
>                 |               |               |
>                 | _____________/|\____________  |
>                 |/ DHCPREQUEST  |  DHCPREQUEST\ |
>                 |               |               |
>                 |               |     Commits configuration
>                 |               |               |
>                 |               | _____________/|
>                 |               |/ DHCPACK      |
>                 |               |               |
>                 |    Initialization complete    |
>                 |               |               |
>                 .               .               .
>                 .               .               .
>                 |               |               |
>                 |      Graceful shutdown        |
>                 |               |               |
>                 |               |\ ____________ |
>                 |               | DHCPRELEASE  \|
>                 |               |               |
>                 |               |        Discards lease
>                 |               |               |
>                 v               v               v
>    Figure 3: Timeline diagram of messages exchanged between DHCP
>              client and servers when allocating a new network address
> 
> 
> 
> 
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>               Server          Client          Server
>           (not selected)                    (selected)
> 
>                 v               v               v
>                 |               |               |
>                 |     Begins initialization     |
>                 |               |               |
>                 | _____________/|\_____________ |
>                 |/DHCPDISCOVER  | DHCPDISCOVER \|
>                 |               |               |
>             Determines          |          Determines
>            configuration        |         configuration
>                 |               |               |
>                 |\              |  ____________/|
>                 | \_________    | /DHCPOFFER    |
>                 |  DHCPOFFER\   |/              |
>                 |            \  |               |
>                 |       Collects replies        |
>                 |              \|               |
>                 |     Selects configuration     |
>                 |               |               |
>                 | _____________/|\____________  |
>                 |/ DHCPREQUEST  |  DHCPREQUEST\ |
>                 |               |               |
>                 |               |     Commits configuration
>                 |               |               |
>                 |               | _____________/|
>                 |               |/ DHCPACK      |
>                 |               |               |
>                 |    Initialization complete    |
>                 |               |               |
>                 .               .               .
>                 .               .               .
>                 |               |               |
>                 |      Graceful shutdown        |
>                 |               |               |
>                 |               |\ ____________ |
>                 |               | DHCPRELEASE  \|
>                 |               |               |
>                 |               |        Discards lease
>                 |               |               |
>                 v               v               v
>    Figure 3: Timeline diagram of messages exchanged between DHCP
>              client and servers when allocating a new network address
> 
> 
> Notes
> -----
> alignment
> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC2131 (no draft string recorded)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol
> Publication Date    : March 1997
> Author(s)           : R. Droms
> Category            : DRAFT STANDARD
> Source              : Dynamic Host Configuration
> Area                : Internet
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
> 
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