Re: [dhcwg] WGLC for draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-03 - Respond by Dec 2, 2013

<ian.farrer@telekom.de> Thu, 28 November 2013 07:54 UTC

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I support this document moving forward (including Sheng’s comments).

Can I add the following editorial suggestion for readability?:

Section 4.1
replace:
(b) if a relay agent receives the message but the relay agent does not identify itself as the target of the message, and the message is not a Relay-reply message.
with:
(b) if the relay agent receives a message which it is not the target of, and the message type is not Relay-reply.

Ian

From: "Bernie Volz (volz)" <volz@cisco.com<mailto:volz@cisco.com>>
Date: Wednesday, 27 November 2013 22:31
To: "dhcwg@ietf.org<mailto:dhcwg@ietf.org>" <dhcwg@ietf.org<mailto:dhcwg@ietf.org>>
Subject: Re: [dhcwg] WGLC for draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-03 - Respond by Dec 2, 2013

This is friendly reminder that we need responses by end of day (anywhere in the world) December 2nd. Sorry for the ‘late’ reminder for those in the US enjoying Thanksgiving.

So far, there has only been Sheng’s (document shepherd) comments.

<WG Co-Chair Hat OFF>
I add my support for this document (with Sheng’s comments addressed as he captured my nits and more).


-          Bernie

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Subject: [dhcwg] WGLC for draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-03 - Respond by Dec 2, 2013


Folks, the authors of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-03 (http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-03) believe it is ready for working group last call. Please review this draft and indicate whether or not you feel it is ready to be published. Your input is important! Please respond by Dec 2nd, 2013.



At the time of this writing, there is no IPR reported against this draft.



Thanks,


-          Tomek & Bernie