[dhcwg] Review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-failover-protocol-03

Carlos Pignataro <cpignata@gmail.com> Mon, 16 January 2017 19:37 UTC

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Reviewer: Carlos Pignataro
Review result: Ready

This document is in great shape, and I do not see any missing
operational considerations. Defaults are appropriately defined.

I will note that there is a response at
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/zJ147M2VjQxTCOyRT7OQ42NYzco
that states that additional figures are forthcoming. I think those
will help (although I am biased as a visual person), and would
encourage the new revision to be posted sooner rather than later.

Thanks,

-- Carlos.