RE: [dhcwg] Attempt at text for draft-ietf-dhc-lifetime-02

matthew.ford@bt.com Fri, 27 August 2004 11:01 UTC

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Subject: RE: [dhcwg] Attempt at text for draft-ietf-dhc-lifetime-02
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Hi Stig,

> I've tried to update the text based on all the suggestions and
> comments received. I may still try to improve the language, but
> please read the text below and let me know if you have problems
> with what it says. Lines from the draft are prefixed by "|". I
> have some comments/questions inline. I'm hoping that we can come
> to agreement on the text in 1-2 weeks, so that I can finalize
> version 02, which then hopefully can go to WGLC.
> 
> 
>>              Information Refresh Time Option for DHCPv6
> 
> What do you think of this name? I think the problem with just
> "refresh time option" is that it sounds more like an option for
> refreshing time... 

I think if you hyphenate Refresh-Time then the meaning is clearer.

Mat

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