Re: [dhcwg] Murray Kucherawy's Discuss on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-24: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Hi Murray,

First of all, many thanks for your review and my apologies that it’s taken so long for me to
reply.

Please see inline below.

Thanks,
Ian

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> DISCUSS:
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> This should be easy to resolve, but we have to ask as it's pretty important:
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> Question 7 of the shepherd writeup, about the authors and BCP 78/79, appears
> not to have been answered.  Were these declarations made?
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> COMMENT:
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> I suggest breaking Section 6 into two subsections, one for each batch of
> registry operations.

[if - done]

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> A possibly ignorant question about YANG modules: Since RFCs 3319 and 8987 are
> referenced from within the module itself, shouldn't they be normative
> references?

[if - RFC3319 is only referenced as it is used by an example module showing how
Additional DHCPv6 options can be modelled and augmented. As this is in the appendices, I think
It’s right to be informative.

RFC8987 does need to be implemented by the relay and is referenced in the ietf-dhcpv6-relay
Module, so this is now a normative reference.]

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