Re: [dhcwg] Last call on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-ldra-01
Alfred Hönes <ah@TR-Sys.de> Thu, 26 November 2009 22:38 UTC
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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] Last call on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-ldra-01
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Folks, I also support this draft. I have studied it again and found a bunch of additional editorial nits that need to be addressed before publication, but simply don't have the cycles available for a complete writeup this (+next) week. The only detail IMHO important for clarity is adding precision in the figures in sections 7.1 through 7.3 : The arrow lines below the network diagrams should be extended to precisely represent the span of the IPv6 links; since the LDRA is operating at layer 2, no IPv6 link can terminate in an LDRA; so all arrows should end below an interface of either a "Client", "Relay*", or "Server" box (where 'interface' in the artwork means the part of the graphical representation of the node that joins the line representing the physical link). I had mentioned this in an earlier review, including detailed examples of how the artwork might better look like, but these recommendations have not been followed so far. Also, the [L2RA] ref. needs to be updated. I'll try to compile the list of editorials soon, but that should not hold off the draft now. Kind regards, Alfred Hönes. -- +------------------------+--------------------------------------------+ | TR-Sys Alfred Hoenes | Alfred Hoenes Dipl.-Math., Dipl.-Phys. | | Gerlinger Strasse 12 | Phone: (+49)7156/9635-0, Fax: -18 | | D-71254 Ditzingen | E-Mail: ah@TR-Sys.de | +------------------------+--------------------------------------------+
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- Re: [dhcwg] Last call on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-ld… Alan Kavanagh
- Re: [dhcwg] Last call on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-ld… Bharat Joshi
- Re: [dhcwg] Last call on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-ld… Alfred Hönes
- Re: [dhcwg] Last call on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-ld… MILES DAVID