Re: [Diffserv] Re: Fwd: RE: Fwd: Re: authors 48 hours: RFC 3289<draft-ietf-diffserv-mib-16.txt> NOW AVAILABLE

[Brian E Carpenter <[e-mail]>]

Dan, if it was just clarifications maybe... but this is errata, hence we
choose between the RFC-Ed errata page or a new RFC.

   Brian

Dan Grossman wrote:
> 
> Why don't we do with the MIB what we did with RFC 2474, 2475, 2597 and 2598:  start a draft
> (can a concluded WG have a WG draft?) that captures clarifications to the MIB?
> 
> Andrew Smith wrote:
> 
> > I'm not convinced that now is the right time to be updating this MIB
> > and/or the RFC that includes it. Some of Tom Irwin's first set of
> > comments fix errors but some (and all of his second set of comments) are
> > clarifications, as were most of mine from May 3th 2002 (below). If we
> > must, then I'd suggest just fixing the syntax errors in the MIB module.
> > But don't things like this usually wait for a "natural" refresh cycle
> > e.g. an attempt to move an RFC to Draft standard? I'd hate to
> > destabilise anyone's plans to implement the current RFC. We've got
> > published/archived fixes on the record so I don't see the urgency to
> > update (other than tidiness). And it's quite likely that we'd be able to
> > remove 20 pages or more with the benefit of another year or so more
> > implementation experience.
> >
> > Just my thoughts - I don't have any significant stake in any current
> > implementation plans so it really ought to be up to others to say what
> > they want done.
> >
> > Andrew Smith
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: [e-mail] [mailto:[e-mail]] On Behalf
> > Of Fred Baker
> > Sent: Thursday, August 29, 2002 6:35 PM
> > To: Kwok Ho Chan
> > Cc: [e-mail]; [e-mail]
> > Subject: [Diffserv] Re: Fwd: RE: Fwd: Re: authors 48 hours: RFC
> > 3289<draft-ietf-diffserv-mib-16.txt> NOW AVAILABLE
> >
> > At 07:45 PM 8/29/2002 -0400, Kwok Ho Chan wrote:
> > >Fred:
> > >Are you referring to the attached E-Mail?
> >
> > yes. I would like all comments edited into the new document to have at
> > least been seen by the working group. I don't think we'll get a lot of
> > commentary, but people should have the opportunity.
> >
> > >-- Kwok --
> > >
> > >>From: "Andrew Smith" <[e-mail]>
> > >>To: "Brian E Carpenter" <[e-mail]>, "Fred Baker"
> > >><[e-mail]>,
> > >>    "Chan, Kwok-Ho [BL60:470:EXCH]"<[e-mail]>
> > >>Cc: <[e-mail]>, <[e-mail]>,
> > >>    "Dan Grossman" <[e-mail]>
> > >>Subject: RE: Fwd: Re: authors 48 hours: RFC
> > >>3289<draft-ietf-diffserv-mib-16.txt> NOW AVAILABLE
> > >>Date: Thu, 30 May 2002 12:20:51 -0700
> > >>X-Mailer: Microsoft Outlook IMO, Build 9.0.2416 (9.0.2911.0)
> > >>Importance: Normal
> > >>X-SMTP-HELO: falcon.mail.pas.earthlink.net
> > >>X-SMTP-MAIL-FROM: [e-mail]
> > >>X-SMTP-RCPT-TO: [e-mail]
> > >>X-SMTP-PEER-INFO: falcon.mail.pas.earthlink.net [207.217.120.74]
> > >>
> > >>I just found out about the "48 hours" today: most of these comments
> > are
> > >>probably (way) too late but there are some editorial things buried in
> > here
> > >>that might be helpful at this late stage:
> > >>
> > >>Please change my contact info:
> > >>         OLD:
> > >>
> > >>                                                        A. Smith
> > >>                                                        Allegro
> > Networks
> > >>         NEW:
> > >>                                                        A. Smith
> > >>                                                        Harbour
> > Networks
> > >>
> > >>11. Authors' Addresses
> > >>
> > >>OLD:
> > >>    Andrew Smith
> > >>    Allegro Networks
> > >>    6399 San Ignacio Ave
> > >>    San Jose, CA 95119
> > >>
> > >>    EMail: [e-mail]
> > >>  NEW:
> > >>    Andrew Smith
> > >>    Harbour Networks
> > >>    Jiuling Building
> > >>    21 North Xisanhuan Ave.
> > >>    Beijing, 100089, PRC
> > >>
> > >>    EMail: [e-mail]
> > >>
> > >>
> > >>
> > >>3.5.3.  diffServMinRateTable - The Minimum Rate Table: The description
> > (both
> > >>here and in the comments in the MIB module and in the DESCRIPTION
> > clauses)
> > >>is unclear on when the Rate and when the Priority parameters are to be
> > used
> > >>and what is their combined effect:
> > >>
> > >>    "When the output rate of a queue or scheduler must be given a
> > minimum
> > >>    rate or a priority, this is done using the diffServMinRateTable.
> > >>    Rates may be expressed as absolute rates, or as a fraction of
> > >>    ifSpeed, and imply the use of a rate-based scheduler such as WFQ
> > or
> > >>    WRR.  The use of a priority implies the use of a Priority
> > Scheduler.
> > >>    Only one of the Absolute or Relative rates needs to be set; the
> > other
> > >>    takes the relevant value as a result.  Excess capacity is
> > distributed
> > >>    proportionally among the inputs to a scheduler using the assured
> > >>    rate.  More complex functionality may be described by augmenting
> > this
> > >>    MIB."
> > >>
> > >>I thought that the type of scheduler was implied by
> > diffServSchedulerMethod,
> > >>not by "use of a priority".  And if you're doing strict priority
> > scheduling,
> > >>neither of Absolute or Relative rates needs to be set, right? Text
> > above
> > >>seems to imply otherwise. See also below.
> > >>
> > >>3.5.5 There's no reference to figure 4. Perhaps it should be from the
> > >>paragraph at the bottom of p18?
> > >>
> > >>3.5.5 Is there a way to keep this set of diagrams closer to (in-line
> > with)
> > >>the text describing them, or at least, on the same page? I know it
> > wastes
> > >>paper/bytes but would add to clarity.
> > >>
> > >>3.5.5 I find some of this relatively new text confusing (this is the
> > first
> > >>time I've seen it so tell me if I'm too late with the following
> > comments).
> > >>Specifically:
> > >>
> > >>    "For representing a Strict Priority scheduler, each scheduler
> > input is
> > >>    assigned a priority with respect to all the other inputs feeding
> > the
> > >>    same scheduler, with default values for the other parameters.
> > >>    Higher-priority traffic that is not being delayed for shaping will
> > be
> > >>    serviced before a lower-priority input.  An example is found in
> > >>    Figure 2."
> > >>
> > >>Clearer (or, at least, more accurate) is:
> > >>
> > >>    "For representing a Strict Priority scheduler, the
> > >>diffServSchedulerMethod is set to diffServSchedulerPriority and the
> > >>prededing queue or scheduler feeding this scheduler input is assigned
> > a
> > >>priority in its associated diffServMinRateEntry with respect to all
> > the
> > >>other inputs feeding the same scheduler (the value of the other
> > parameters
> > >>in this entry are irrelevant). Traffic from higher-priority inputs to
> > this
> > >>scheduler will be serviced before that from lower-priority inputs. An
> > >>example is found in Figure 2."
> > >>
> > >>Figures 3, 4 and 5: suggest you use more specific labels in some of
> > the
> > >>boxes to remove confusion:
> > >>- figure 3, replace "Rate" with "MaxRate" in each box;
> > >>- figure 4, put something in the empty boxes e.g. "n/a" or leave them
> > out.
> > >>Replace "Shaping Rate" with "MaxRate" - we have no parameter called
> > shaping
> > >>rate.
> > >>
> > >>3.5.5: suggest you lose the NOTE and its text, just above figure 4, or
> > at
> > >>least join it up with the following paragraph.
> > >>
> > >>3.5.5: last paragraph should be part of 3.6 really. And glue Figure 6
> > to
> > >>this paragraph for clarity.
> > >>
> > >>3.6: change "four AF classes" to "four AF classes, each with 3 levels
> > of
> > >>drop precedence or 'colours'". We must be clear that this is just an
> > example
> > >>of an AF implementation that chooses to do 4 classes, each with 3
> > colours.
> > >>
> > >>3.6: Suggest you use the same example scenario for figures 6 and 7 -
> > it's
> > >>confusing to use different example scenarios. Figure 7 introduces a
> > new kind
> > >>of "hybrid" notation for the first time (we've always gone
> > left-to-right
> > >>before, not top-to-bottom - I preferred the former for clarity): I
> > suggest
> > >>it needs some words to explain the notation (rhetorical questions:
> > what do
> > >>the lines imply when they don't have arrowheads? what are the 2 or 3
> > >>different lines exiting from the meters? These are all deducible from
> > the
> > >>following text but it's made harder work due to the new notation. BTW,
> > >>there's an arrow missing out of the back/bottom/right Action box.
> > >>
> > >>3.6: suggest you add the "everything else" case that you discuss in
> > the text
> > >>to figure 7.
> > >>
> > >>3.6.: there's no reference to figure 7 in the text.
> > >>
> > >>3.6 and 3.7: actually, I'm not sure why these sections are here in
> > this
> > >>document - a few years ago, we took out similar "tutorial" material
> > and put
> > >>it in the Model draft. There's nothing in these sections that is
> > specific to
> > >>the MIB. The right thing to have in this document is the "translation"
> > of an
> > >>example like this into the structures and linkages used by the MIB but
> > these
> > >>sections do not help with this. We had such material in draft-09 and
> > it has
> > >>disappeared (I'm not saying 3.6 and 3.7 aren't useful material but it
> > just
> > >>does not belong in this document) - I think this is a backward step.
> > >>
> > >>Anyhow, I'm probably too late to the party with most of these comments
> > - I
> > >>should have reviewed it when the IESG last call was in progress (I
> > didn't
> > >>realise so much had changed since -09 which was the last version that
> > I
> > >>reviewed properly).
> > >>
> > >>Andrew
> > >>
> > >>
> > >>
> > >>
> > >>-----Original Message-----
> > >>From: Brian E Carpenter [mailto:[e-mail]]
> > >>Sent: Thursday, May 30, 2002 5:56 AM
> > >>To: Fred Baker
> > >>Cc: [e-mail]; [e-mail]; Andrew
> > Smith;
> > >>Kwok Ho Chan
> > >>Subject: Re: Fwd: Re: authors 48 hours: RFC
> > >>3289<draft-ietf-diffserv-mib-16.txt> NOW AVAILABLE
> > >>
> > >>
> > >>OK, in view of Kwok's response we can give it another day or say, but
> > >>then...
> > >>
> > >>    Brian
> > >>
> > >>Fred Baker wrote:
> > >> >
> > >> > You may need to make an executive decision here. Andrew and Kwok
> > are AWOL.
> > >> >
> > >> > >Date: Wed, 29 May 2002 19:50:58 GMT
> > >> > >To: [e-mail], [e-mail]
> > >> > >Subject: Re: authors 48 hours: RFC 3289
> > >> > >   <draft-ietf-diffserv-mib-16.txt> NOW AVAILABLE
> > >> > >Cc: [e-mail], [e-mail], [e-mail],
> > >> > >         [e-mail], [e-mail]
> > >> > >From: [e-mail]
> > >> > >X-Sun-Charset: US-ASCII
> > >> > >
> > >> > >Kwok Ho and Andrew,
> > >> > >
> > >> > >We still have not heard from you regarding this document.  Please
> > let
> > >> > >us know if there are any corrections required.
> > >> > >
> > >> > >We are waiting to hear from you.
> > >> > >
> > >> > >RFC Editor
> > >> > >
> > >> > >
> > >> > >----- Begin Included Message -----
> > >> > >
> > >> > > >From [e-mail]  Thu May 23 16:22:59 2002
> > >> > >Date: Thu, 23 May 2002 23:22:45 GMT
> > >> > >To: [e-mail], [e-mail]
> > >> > >Subject: Re: authors 48 hours: RFC 3289
> > >> > >   <draft-ietf-diffserv-mib-16.txt> NOW AVAILABLE
> > >> > >Cc: [e-mail], [e-mail],
> > >>[e-mail],
> > >> > >    [e-mail], [e-mail]
> > >> > >From: [e-mail]
> > >> > >X-Sun-Charset: US-ASCII
> > >> > >X-AntiVirus: scanned by AMaViS 0.2.1
> > >> > >Content-Length: 3636
> > >> > >
> > >> > >Kwok Ho and Andrew,
> > >> > >
> > >> > >Please let us know if the document is ready to be published.
> > >> > >
> > >> > >We are awaiting your reply.
> > >> > >
> > >> > >Thank you.
> > >> > >
> > >> > >RFC Editor
> > >> > >
> > >> > >
> > >> > > > From [e-mail]  Tue May 21 09:25:15 2002
> > >> > > > Date: Tue, 21 May 2002 16:24:54 GMT
> > >> > > > To: [e-mail], [e-mail]
> > >> > > > Subject: Re: authors 48 hours: RFC 3289
> > >> > > >   <draft-ietf-diffserv-mib-16.txt> NOW AVAILABLE
> > >> > > > Cc: [e-mail], [e-mail],
> > >>[e-mail],
> > >> > > >    [e-mail], [e-mail]
> > >> > > > From: [e-mail]
> > >> > > > X-Sun-Charset: US-ASCII
> > >> > > > X-AntiVirus: scanned by AMaViS 0.2.1
> > >> > > > Content-Length: 2866
> > >> > > >
> > >> > > > Authors,
> > >> > > >
> > >> > > > We have not heard any further from you regarding this document.
> > We
> > >> > > > would appreciate a confirmation that the document is ready to
> > be
> > >> > > > published as it now appears at:
> > >> > > >
> > >> > > >    ftp://ftp.isi.edu/in-notes/authors/rfc3289.txt
> > >> > > >
> > >> > > > We will wait to hear from you before continuing on.
> > >> > > >
> > >> > > > Thank you.
> > >> > > >
> > >> > > > RFC Editor
> > >> > > >
> > >> > > >
> > >> > > > > From [e-mail]  Mon May 13 11:51:19 2002
> > >> > > > > Date: Mon, 13 May 2002 18:50:53 GMT
> > >> > > > > To: [e-mail], [e-mail]
> > >> > > > > Subject: Re: authors 48 hours: RFC 3289
> > >> > > > >   <draft-ietf-diffserv-mib-16.txt> NOW AVAILABLE
> > >> > > > > Cc: [e-mail], [e-mail],
> > >> > > [e-mail],
> > >> > > > >    [e-mail], [e-mail]
> > >> > > > > From: [e-mail]
> > >> > > > > X-Sun-Charset: US-ASCII
> > >> > > > > X-AntiVirus: scanned by AMaViS 0.2.1
> > >> > > > > Content-Length: 1984
> > >> > > > >
> > >> > > > > Fred,
> > >> > > > >
> > >> > > > > Thank you for bringing this to our attention.  It now parses
> > >> > > > > successfully.
> > >> > > > >
> > >> > > > > We have updated your contact information in the authors
> > address
> > >> > > > > section, as well as within the mib.
> > >> > > > >
> > >> > > > > Please let us know if there are any further corrections
> > required.
> > >>We
> > >> > > > > will wait to hear from you.
> > >> > > > >
> > >> > > > > Thank you.
> > >> > > > >
> > >> > > > > RFC editor
> > >> > > > >
> > >> > > > >
> > >> > > > > > From [e-mail]  Fri May 10 01:03:56 2002
> > >> > > > > > X-Sender: [e-mail]
> > >> > > > > > X-Mailer: QUALCOMM Windows Eudora Version 5.1
> > >> > > > > > Date: Fri, 10 May 2002 16:03:24 +0800
> > >> > > > > > To: [e-mail]
> > >> > > > > > From: Fred Baker <[e-mail]>
> > >> > > > > > Subject: Re: authors 48 hours: RFC 3289
> > >> > > > > >   <draft-ietf-diffserv-mib-16.txt> NOW AVAILABLE
> > >> > > > > > Cc: [e-mail], [e-mail],
> > >> > > > > >    [e-mail], [e-mail],
> > [e-mail],
> > >> > > > > >    [e-mail]
> > >> > > > > > Mime-Version: 1.0
> > >> > > > > > X-AntiVirus: scanned by AMaViS 0.2.1
> > >> > > > > >
> > >> > > > > > At 10:37 PM 5/9/2002 +0000, [e-mail]
> > wrote:
> > >> > > > > > >FYI:
> > >> > > > > > >
> > >> > > > > > >W: f(rfc3289.mi2), (42,1) Textual convention "Dscp"
> > defined but
> > >> > > not used
> > >> > > > > > >W: f(rfc3289.mi2), (52,1) Textual convention "DscpOrAny"
> > defined
> > >>but
> > >> > > > > > >not used
> > >> > > > > >
> > >> > > > > > these two warnings come up because the TCs are in a
> > separate MIB
> > >> > > Module
> > >> > > > > > from the main mib, and are imported into it. They are fine.
> > >> > > > > >
> > >> > > > > > My contact information has changed slightly; I have a new
> > physical
> > >> > > address.
> > >> > > > > >
> > >> > > > > >
> > >>/=====================================================================
> > /
> > >> > > > > >   |     Fred Baker                 |        1121 Via Del
> > Rey
> > >>|
> > >> > > > > >   |     Cisco Fellow               |        Santa Barbara,
> > >>California |
> > >> > > > > >   +--------------------------------+        93117 USA
> > >>|
> > >> > > > > >   | Nothing will ever be attempted,| phone: [phone]
> > >>|
> > >> > > > > >   | if all possible objections must| fax:   [phone]
> > >>|
> > >> > > > > >   | be first overcome.             |
> > >>|
> > >> > > > > >   |     Dr. Johnson, Rasselas, 1759|
> > >>|
> > >> > > > > >
> > >>/=====================================================================
> > /
> > >> > > > > >
> > >> > > > >
> > >> > > >
> > >> > >
> > >> > >
> > >> > >----- End Included Message -----
> > >
> >
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