Re: [Dime] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dime-doic-rate-control-05.txt
Steve Donovan <srdonovan@usdonovans.com> Wed, 22 March 2017 22:02 UTC
Return-Path: <srdonovan@usdonovans.com>
X-Original-To: dime@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: dime@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id C57201293DA for <dime@ietfa.amsl.com>; Wed, 22 Mar 2017 15:02:59 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -0.099
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-0.099 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, MISSING_HEADERS=1.021, SPF_NEUTRAL=0.779] autolearn=no autolearn_force=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id iqNt7j5SIIT6 for <dime@ietfa.amsl.com>; Wed, 22 Mar 2017 15:02:57 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from biz131.inmotionhosting.com (biz131.inmotionhosting.com [173.247.247.114]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id E197C129851 for <dime@ietf.org>; Wed, 22 Mar 2017 15:02:57 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from cpe-97-99-50-102.tx.res.rr.com ([97.99.50.102]:64001 helo=Steves-MacBook-Air.local) by biz131.inmotionhosting.com with esmtpsa (TLSv1.2:ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256:128) (Exim 4.87) (envelope-from <srdonovan@usdonovans.com>) id 1cqoL7-001Ebu-Uy for dime@ietf.org; Wed, 22 Mar 2017 15:02:57 -0700
References: <148727508790.1071.1263646507149967833.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com> <46a97b6d-a4bd-0275-10db-b321dd4d95ed@usdonovans.com> <C306C371-72FB-48D5-BEB4-6910133E112B@gmail.com> <CABPQr24fQjeikXqrx1BBCu_hO61QpT-+wVU74yFeV6n_xDU1uw@mail.gmail.com>
Cc: "dime@ietf.org" <dime@ietf.org>
From: Steve Donovan <srdonovan@usdonovans.com>
Message-ID: <d4bbd443-5b9d-9d50-7698-cf3216858718@usdonovans.com>
Date: Wed, 22 Mar 2017 17:02:45 -0500
User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; Intel Mac OS X 10.12; rv:45.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/45.8.0
MIME-Version: 1.0
In-Reply-To: <CABPQr24fQjeikXqrx1BBCu_hO61QpT-+wVU74yFeV6n_xDU1uw@mail.gmail.com>
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="------------0C8C2FA3EA13BB6314E880E4"
X-OutGoing-Spam-Status: No, score=0.2
X-AntiAbuse: This header was added to track abuse, please include it with any abuse report
X-AntiAbuse: Primary Hostname - biz131.inmotionhosting.com
X-AntiAbuse: Original Domain - ietf.org
X-AntiAbuse: Originator/Caller UID/GID - [47 12] / [47 12]
X-AntiAbuse: Sender Address Domain - usdonovans.com
X-Get-Message-Sender-Via: biz131.inmotionhosting.com: authenticated_id: srdonovan@usdonovans.com
X-Authenticated-Sender: biz131.inmotionhosting.com: srdonovan@usdonovans.com
X-Source:
X-Source-Args:
X-Source-Dir:
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dime/-qfD2N2O1lslWTUTaD-LZRt5MOs>
Subject: Re: [Dime] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dime-doic-rate-control-05.txt
X-BeenThere: dime@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.22
Precedence: list
List-Id: Diameter Maintanence and Extentions Working Group <dime.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/dime>, <mailto:dime-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/dime/>
List-Post: <mailto:dime@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:dime-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dime>, <mailto:dime-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 22 Mar 2017 22:03:00 -0000
MIsha, See my comments inline. Regards, Steve On 2/18/17 2:43 AM, Misha Zaytsev wrote: > Hi Steve, > > I'm OK with most your edits, just some extra comments from my side: > > The following comment was just partially applied. There are still > section titles that are not in an upper case. > 13. Upper case in section titles for section 7.3.1, 7.3.2, 7.3.3, 8.1 > and 8.2 > In addition to the listed ones, section 6.3 title is also under the > comment. > I believe I have captured all of the section titles in the next version. I'm sure the RFC editor will correct any that I missed. > One new comment: > > Following the procedures defined in [draft-ietf-dime-doic] > > Are we talking about RFC7683 here? Yes, change made. > > All in all, I'm OK with your edits, but I still have concern about the > text taken from SIP RFC. > As I noted, I think it would be better to have it reworked deeper and > not just updated with minor changes to be aligned with DOIC concept. > But it looks this is a matter of preference... Noted. > > Best regards, > > /Misha > > > > 2017-02-18 2:23 GMT+03:00 jouni.nospam <jouni.nospam@gmail.com > <mailto:jouni.nospam@gmail.com>>: > > Thanks Steve. > > - Jouni > > > On Feb 16, 2017, at 12:00 PM, Steve Donovan > <srdonovan@usdonovans.com <mailto:srdonovan@usdonovans.com>> wrote: > > > > All, > > > > I've updated the rate control draft based on comments received > during the most recent last call. > > > > I've attached a diff file showing the changes. > > > > Regards, > > > > Steve > > > > On 2/16/17 1:58 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org > <mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote: > >> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line > Internet-Drafts directories. > >> This draft is a work item of the Diameter Maintenance and > Extensions of the IETF. > >> > >> Title : Diameter Overload Rate Control > >> Authors : Steve Donovan > >> Eric Noel > >> Filename : draft-ietf-dime-doic-rate-control-05.txt > >> Pages : 19 > >> Date : 2017-02-16 > >> > >> Abstract: > >> This specification documents an extension to the Diameter > Overload > >> Indication Conveyance (DOIC) [RFC7683] base solution. This > extension > >> adds a new overload control abatement algorithm. This abatement > >> algorithm allows for a DOIC reporting node to specify a > maximum rate > >> at which a DOIC reacting node sends Diameter requests to the > DOIC > >> reporting node. > >> > >> Requirements > >> > >> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > >> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dime-doic-rate-control/ > <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dime-doic-rate-control/> > >> > >> There's also a htmlized version available at: > >> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dime-doic-rate-control-05 > <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dime-doic-rate-control-05> > >> > >> A diff from the previous version is available at: > >> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dime-doic-rate-control-05 > <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dime-doic-rate-control-05> > >> > >> > >> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time > of submission > >> until the htmlized version and diff are available at > tools.ietf.org <http://tools.ietf.org>. > >> > >> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > >> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > <ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/> > >> > >> _______________________________________________ > >> DiME mailing list > >> DiME@ietf.org <mailto:DiME@ietf.org> > >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dime > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dime> > > > > <Diff_ draft-ietf-dime-doic-rate-control-04.txt - > draft-ietf-dime-doic-rate-control-05.txt>_______________________________________________ > > DiME mailing list > > DiME@ietf.org <mailto:DiME@ietf.org> > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dime > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dime> > > _______________________________________________ > DiME mailing list > DiME@ietf.org <mailto:DiME@ietf.org> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dime > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dime> > >
- [Dime] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dime-doic-rate-cont… internet-drafts
- Re: [Dime] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dime-doic-rate-… Steve Donovan
- Re: [Dime] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dime-doic-rate-… jouni.nospam
- Re: [Dime] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dime-doic-rate-… Misha Zaytsev
- Re: [Dime] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dime-doic-rate-… Steve Donovan