Re: [Dime] AD review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc4005bis-09.txt

Glen Zorn <glenzorn@gmail.com> Wed, 11 July 2012 10:24 UTC

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On Wed, 2012-07-11 at 09:09 +0200, Benoit Claise wrote:
> Hi Lionel,
> 
> > Hi Benoit,
> >  
> > - I could not find the meaning of * in, for example,
> >  
> >                           [ CHAP-Auth ]
> >                           [ CHAP-Challenge ]
> >                         * [ Framed-Compression ]
> >                           [ Framed-Interface-Id ]
> >                           [ Framed-IP-Address ]
> >                         * [ Framed-IPv6-Prefix ]
> >                           [ Framed-IP-Netmask ]
> >                           [ Framed-MTU ]
> >                           [ Framed-Protocol ]
> >                           [ ARAP-Password ]
> >                           [ ARAP-Security ]
> >                         * [ ARAP-Security-Data ]
> >                         * [ Login-IP-Host ]
> >                         * [ Login-IPv6-Host ]
> >                           [ Login-LAT-Group ]
> >                           [ Login-LAT-Node ]
> >                           [ Login-LAT-Port ]
> >                           [ Login-LAT-Service ]
> >                         * [ Tunneling ]
> >                         * [ Proxy-Info ]
> >                         * [ Route-Record ]
> >                         * [ AVP ]
> > [[LM]] the « * » in front the AVP means that 0, 1 or more AVP scan be present in the request (or in a Grouped AVP). It follows rules used in RFC3588 and defined in RFC 5234 (http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5234#section-3.6).
> >  
> 
> BC> Thanks for the education.
> Is this so obvious to the Diameter readers, including the newcomers,
> that we don't need to mention it?
> In other words, am I the only one NOT knowing this? ;-)


Hmm.  draft-ietf-dime-rfc3588bis is listed as  a normative reference in
4005bis and RFC 5238 is listed as a normative reference in
draft-ietf-dime-rfc3588bis.  My understanding is that one cannot expect
to read and understand an RFC without having read and understood the
normative references thereof.  Is my understanding correct?  If so, then
there is in fact no need to mention it since any reader cognizant of
that requirement will already know (or could easily refresh the memory
of) what the notation means.


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> 
> 
> > Regards,
> >  
> > Lionel
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