Re: [Dime] AD review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc4005bis-09.txt

Glen Zorn <glenzorn@gmail.com> Wed, 11 July 2012 10:26 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Dime] AD review of draft-ietf-dime-rfc4005bis-09.txt
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On Wed, 2012-07-11 at 07:40 +0000, lionel.morand@orange.com wrote:
> Hi,
> 
>  
> 
> Benoit, it is true that there is in the RFC4005 an implicit reference
> to the RFC3588 when describing the new command (AAR/AAA). It could be
> useful to explicitly state that the definition of the new command
> follows the rules described in RFC3588(bis). 


Actually, the references to 3588bis are abundant, explicit and
normative...


> 
>  
> 
> About Dieter’s comment, the CCF specification of a command is clearly
> defined in RFC3588(bis) with an explicit reference to RFC5234 for
> further details, so I don’t think that it is needed to provide again
> the description in this specification and in any other diameter
> specification referencing the RFC3588(bis).


Indeed.

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