Re: [Dime] WGLC #1 for draft-ietf-dime-load-02

Jouni Korhonen <jouni.nospam@gmail.com> Fri, 17 June 2016 23:30 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Dime] WGLC #1 for draft-ietf-dime-load-02
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Ok. No too many review received but I think we can still conclude the 
WGLC successfully. The chairs look forward advancing the draft out of 
the WG..

- JOuni

6/10/2016, 8:23 AM, A. Jean Mahoney kirjoitti:
>
>
> On 6/9/16 8:03 PM, Steve Donovan wrote:
>> Jean,
>>
>> Thanks for the detailed review.  I have made all of the changed
>> suggested below.
>
> Thanks!
>
> Jean
>
>>
>> Regards,
>>
>> Steve
>>
>> On 6/6/16 4:06 PM, A. Jean Mahoney wrote:
>>> Hi Steve,
>>>
>>> Thanks for the doc. I found only nits:
>>>
>>> Section 2.  Remove "Routing Information - " from the beginning of the
>>> Routing Information definition.
>>>
>>> Section 5 Para 7.      s/next hop/next-hop
>>>
>>> Section 5 Para 7.      s/do not have/does not have
>>>
>>> Section 5 Para 10.     s/goal is make/goal is to make
>>>
>>> Section 5 last para.   s/nodes load/node's load
>>>
>>> Section 5.1 Para 5.    s/it's own/its own
>>>
>>> Section 6.1.1 Para 2.  s/it's own/its own
>>>
>>> Section 6.1.1 Para 2.  s/Source-ID/SourceID
>>>
>>> Section 6.1.1 Para 4.  s/Value AVP/Load-Value AVP
>>>
>>> Section 6.1.1 Para 7.  s/endpoints peer/endpoint's peer (2 occurrences)
>>>
>>> Section 6.1.2 Para 2.  s/it's own/its own
>>>
>>> Section 6.1.2 Para 2.  s/Source-ID/SourceID
>>>
>>> Section 6.1.2 Para 4.  s/Value AVP/Load-Value AVP
>>>
>>> Section 6.2 Para 5.    s/Value AVP/Load-Value AVP
>>>
>>> Section 6.2 Para 6.    s/Source-ID/SourceID
>>>
>>>
>>> Jean
>>>
>>>
>>> On 5/24/16 10:30 AM, Jouni Korhonen wrote:
>>>> Folks,
>>>>
>>>> This email starts the WGLC #1 for draft-ietf-dime-load-02. Please,
>>>> review the document, post your comments to the mailing list and also
>>>> insert them into the Issue Tracker with your proposed resolution.
>>>>
>>>> WGLC starts: 5/24/2016
>>>>        ends: 6/7/2016 EOB PDT
>>>>
>>>> - Jouni & Lionel
>>>>
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