Re: [Dime] AD review draft-ietf-dime-app-design-guide

Jouni <jouni.nospam@gmail.com> Fri, 18 April 2014 17:41 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Dime] AD review draft-ietf-dime-app-design-guide
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Ok. Will check the write-up.

- Jouni

On Apr 18, 2014, at 7:06 PM, Benoit Claise wrote:

> Hi Lionel,
> 
> Thanks for the new version.
> See in line 
>> 
>> 
>> - When I read the document, it looked to me as a BCP.
>> BCP definition from RFC 2026:
>> 5.  BEST CURRENT PRACTICE (BCP) RFCs
>>  
>>    The BCP subseries of the RFC series is designed to be a way to
>>    standardize practices and the results of community deliberations. 
>> Interestingly, the charter mentions:
>> May 2012, Submit 'Diameter Application Design Guidelines' to the IESG for consideration as a BCP document
>> [LM] discussed in another email thread.
>> 
>> If you go to BCP, don't forget to update the abstract, and the writeup.
> Abstract:
>     
>    It is meant as a guidelines document and
>    therefore as informative in nature.
> 
> I would remove this sentence. Informative and BCP don't go along very well.
> 
> Jouni, don't forget to update the writeup.
> 
>> 
>> 
>> - Editorial in section 5.7
>> OLD:
>> Destination- Realm
>>  
>> NEW:
>> Destination-Realm
>> 
> Still there.
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> - Section 5.9
>>  Applications that do not understand these AVPs can discard
>>    them upon receipt. 
>> Generic comment: Each time there is a sentence like this one above, we should mention RFC 6733 as the reference.
>> This document is not an extension/deviation to RFC 6733.
>> [LM] ok
> Still there.
>> 
> 
> Regards, Benoit
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