[Dime] comments on draft-ietf-dime-local-keytran-02
Frank Xia <xiayangsong@huawei.com> Thu, 29 April 2010 23:05 UTC
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Date: Thu, 29 Apr 2010 18:05:09 -0500
From: Frank Xia <xiayangsong@huawei.com>
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Subject: [Dime] comments on draft-ietf-dime-local-keytran-02
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Hi all Per Qin's request, I have reviewed the draft which is simple and clear. However, I did observe that there is no "Attribute Value Pair Occurrence Tables" section which is very useful for implementation. There is also a typo in section 3.1.5 which says ".The Key-SPI AVP (AVP Code <AC5>) is of is of type Unsigned32" BR Frank