[Dime] AD review of draft-ietf-dime-agent-overload-08

Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> Mon, 09 January 2017 14:22 UTC

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Subject: [Dime] AD review of draft-ietf-dime-agent-overload-08
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Hi all,

Sorry for the delay with this - it was mis-routed to
Katheeen's queue somehow.

I've done my AD review and will start IETF LC shortly.

I agree with the shepherd that the i-d nits output can be
ignored;-)

My nitty comments below can be handled as part of IETF
LC,

Cheers,
S.

- section 2: might be nice to add "Diameter agent" to this
section. Either that or just eliminte this section if
these terms are defined already elsewhere.

- 5.1.1: OC_PEER_REPORT is very abruptly introduced.  A
sentence to describe it or point to where it's defined
(6.1.1 I guess) would maybe be good.