Re: [Dime] Further comments on draft-ietf-dime-priority-avps-00.txt
ken carlberg <carlberg@g11.org.uk> Fri, 07 May 2010 14:26 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Dime] Further comments on draft-ietf-dime-priority-avps-00.txt
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Piers, thanks. I'll address your comments in the next rev. -ken On May 6, 2010, at 1:15 PM, P O'Hanlon wrote: > A few more comments. > > Sec 3. > - It's probably worth adding a specific reference for the "DIAMETER > QoS application.." ie soon-to-be RFC5866 (see: > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dime-diameter-qos-15) > > Sec 5. > - It would be good to add some explanatory text to the example. > > Where SIP is mentioned it may be useful to state any implications or > otherwise for "Diameter Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) Application" > (RFC4740). At a minimum it should be mentioned in Section 5 as it > refers to the MAA/MAR messages defined in RFC4740. > > Piers > _______________________________________________ > DiME mailing list > DiME@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dime
- [Dime] Further comments on draft-ietf-dime-priori… P O'Hanlon
- Re: [Dime] Further comments on draft-ietf-dime-pr… ken carlberg