[Dime] OVLI: comments to 5.3

"Wiehe, Ulrich (NSN - DE/Munich)" <ulrich.wiehe@nsn.com> Fri, 06 December 2013 15:14 UTC

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From: "Wiehe, Ulrich (NSN - DE/Munich)" <ulrich.wiehe@nsn.com>
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Dear all,

here are comments to clause 5.3:

1. The first sentence is incomplete (Since <a> and <b>, finding out whether <c> or <d>.), and I have no idea what the intention is.

2. In the first sentence "...endpoint are..." should probably read "...endpoints are..."

3. In the second sentence there is a superfluous "capability".

Best regards
Ulrich