Re: [Dime] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-dime-rfc4006bis-08: (with COMMENT)

Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> Thu, 24 May 2018 12:45 UTC

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From: Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>
To: Yuval Lifshitz <yuvalif@yahoo.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Dime] Alexey Melnikov's No Objection on draft-ietf-dime-rfc4006bis-08: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Yuval,

On Thu, May 24, 2018, at 1:36 PM, Yuval Lifshitz wrote:
> 
> Hi Alexey,
> Different Redirect-Address-Type values would mean different formats of
> Redirect-Server-Address, this is why the formatting is specified in
> 8.38 and not 8.39.Ah, great.

Maybe point to section 8.38 in section 8.39? E.g. something like
"The address syntax is specified by Redirect-Address-Type (see
Section 8.38)"?
Best Regards,
Alexey

> 
> Yuval
> 
> On Thursday, May 24, 2018, 3:26:54 p.m. GMT+3, Alexey Melnikov
> <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm> wrote:> 
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> Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-dime-rfc4006bis-08: No Objection
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> ----------------------------------------------------------------------> COMMENT:
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> I only scanned the document, so I only have one minor
> question/comment:> 
> In Section 8.39: Redirect-Server-Address looks underspecified to
> me. It says> "address". Is it a well known DIAMETER term? What is the syntax of
> address? Is> it a URI or something else?
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