Re: [Dime] comments on draft-ietf-dime-extended-naptr-01

Mark Jones <mark@azu.ca> Wed, 28 July 2010 13:22 UTC

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Thank you for the review, Glen.
I'll fix these issues in the next revision.

Regards
Mark

On Sat, Jul 3, 2010 at 3:46 AM, Glen Zorn <gwz@net-zen.net> wrote:
> 1) The last paragraph of Section 3 says:
>
>   The DNS administrator of some domain SHOULD also
>   provision base RFC 3588 style NAPTR records [RFC2915] in order to
>   guarantee backwards compatibility with legacy RFC 3588 compliant
>   Diameter peers.
>
> The word "some" doesn't really make sense to me; suggest changing it to
> "the" or "a".
>
> 2) The reference to I-D.ietf-dime-diameter-qos needs to be updated to RFC
> 5866.
>
> Aside from these minor problems, I think that the draft is ready for
> publication.
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