Re: [Dime] WGLC #1 for draft-ietf-dime-load-02

Jouni Korhonen <jouni.nospam@gmail.com> Fri, 17 June 2016 23:37 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Dime] WGLC #1 for draft-ietf-dime-load-02
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Having said this please submit the revised version.

- JOuni

6/17/2016, 4:30 PM, Jouni Korhonen kirjoitti:
> Ok. No too many review received but I think we can still conclude the
> WGLC successfully. The chairs look forward advancing the draft out of
> the WG..
>
> - JOuni
>
> 6/10/2016, 8:23 AM, A. Jean Mahoney kirjoitti:
>>
>>
>> On 6/9/16 8:03 PM, Steve Donovan wrote:
>>> Jean,
>>>
>>> Thanks for the detailed review.  I have made all of the changed
>>> suggested below.
>>
>> Thanks!
>>
>> Jean
>>
>>>
>>> Regards,
>>>
>>> Steve
>>>
>>> On 6/6/16 4:06 PM, A. Jean Mahoney wrote:
>>>> Hi Steve,
>>>>
>>>> Thanks for the doc. I found only nits:
>>>>
>>>> Section 2.  Remove "Routing Information - " from the beginning of the
>>>> Routing Information definition.
>>>>
>>>> Section 5 Para 7.      s/next hop/next-hop
>>>>
>>>> Section 5 Para 7.      s/do not have/does not have
>>>>
>>>> Section 5 Para 10.     s/goal is make/goal is to make
>>>>
>>>> Section 5 last para.   s/nodes load/node's load
>>>>
>>>> Section 5.1 Para 5.    s/it's own/its own
>>>>
>>>> Section 6.1.1 Para 2.  s/it's own/its own
>>>>
>>>> Section 6.1.1 Para 2.  s/Source-ID/SourceID
>>>>
>>>> Section 6.1.1 Para 4.  s/Value AVP/Load-Value AVP
>>>>
>>>> Section 6.1.1 Para 7.  s/endpoints peer/endpoint's peer (2 occurrences)
>>>>
>>>> Section 6.1.2 Para 2.  s/it's own/its own
>>>>
>>>> Section 6.1.2 Para 2.  s/Source-ID/SourceID
>>>>
>>>> Section 6.1.2 Para 4.  s/Value AVP/Load-Value AVP
>>>>
>>>> Section 6.2 Para 5.    s/Value AVP/Load-Value AVP
>>>>
>>>> Section 6.2 Para 6.    s/Source-ID/SourceID
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Jean
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> On 5/24/16 10:30 AM, Jouni Korhonen wrote:
>>>>> Folks,
>>>>>
>>>>> This email starts the WGLC #1 for draft-ietf-dime-load-02. Please,
>>>>> review the document, post your comments to the mailing list and also
>>>>> insert them into the Issue Tracker with your proposed resolution.
>>>>>
>>>>> WGLC starts: 5/24/2016
>>>>>        ends: 6/7/2016 EOB PDT
>>>>>
>>>>> - Jouni & Lionel
>>>>>
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