Re: [Dime] WGLC #1 for draft-ietf-dime-load-02

Steve Donovan <srdonovan@usdonovans.com> Fri, 10 June 2016 01:03 UTC

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Jean,

Thanks for the detailed review.  I have made all of the changed 
suggested below.

Regards,

Steve

On 6/6/16 4:06 PM, A. Jean Mahoney wrote:
> Hi Steve,
>
> Thanks for the doc. I found only nits:
>
> Section 2.  Remove "Routing Information - " from the beginning of the 
> Routing Information definition.
>
> Section 5 Para 7.      s/next hop/next-hop
>
> Section 5 Para 7.      s/do not have/does not have
>
> Section 5 Para 10.     s/goal is make/goal is to make
>
> Section 5 last para.   s/nodes load/node's load
>
> Section 5.1 Para 5.    s/it's own/its own
>
> Section 6.1.1 Para 2.  s/it's own/its own
>
> Section 6.1.1 Para 2.  s/Source-ID/SourceID
>
> Section 6.1.1 Para 4.  s/Value AVP/Load-Value AVP
>
> Section 6.1.1 Para 7.  s/endpoints peer/endpoint's peer (2 occurrences)
>
> Section 6.1.2 Para 2.  s/it's own/its own
>
> Section 6.1.2 Para 2.  s/Source-ID/SourceID
>
> Section 6.1.2 Para 4.  s/Value AVP/Load-Value AVP
>
> Section 6.2 Para 5.    s/Value AVP/Load-Value AVP
>
> Section 6.2 Para 6.    s/Source-ID/SourceID
>
>
> Jean
>
>
> On 5/24/16 10:30 AM, Jouni Korhonen wrote:
>> Folks,
>>
>> This email starts the WGLC #1 for draft-ietf-dime-load-02. Please,
>> review the document, post your comments to the mailing list and also
>> insert them into the Issue Tracker with your proposed resolution.
>>
>> WGLC starts: 5/24/2016
>>        ends: 6/7/2016 EOB PDT
>>
>> - Jouni & Lionel
>>
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