Re: [Dime] a couple of comments on draft-ietf-dime-rfc3588bis
Victor Fajardo <vf0213@gmail.com> Tue, 18 May 2010 20:51 UTC
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From: Victor Fajardo <vf0213@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Dime] a couple of comments on draft-ietf-dime-rfc3588bis
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Hi Glen, Thanks. Will add fixes for these comments .... regards, victor On Tue, May 18, 2010 at 1:08 AM, Glen Zorn <gwz@net-zen.net> wrote: > 1) Section 4.3 is entitled "Derived AVP Data Formats" but the first > paragraph states "An > application that defines new AVP Derived Data Formats MUST include them in > a > section > entitled "AVP Derived Data Formats"; it would be good to make the title and > the text consistent. I suggest s/AVP Derived Data Formats/Derived AVP Data > Formats/. > > 2) In the same section, I think that it would be cleaner to put the > definitions of the derived data types (Address, Time, etc.) into separate > sub-sections. > > 3) Again in Section 4.3, the formatting of the description of the > IPFilterRule format seems kind of screwed-up (wanders across the page). > > _______________________________________________ > DiME mailing list > DiME@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dime >
- [Dime] a couple of comments on draft-ietf-dime-rf… Glen Zorn
- Re: [Dime] a couple of comments on draft-ietf-dim… Victor Fajardo