Re: [Dime] WGLC #1 for draft-ietf-dime-load-02

"A. Jean Mahoney" <mahoney@nostrum.com> Fri, 10 June 2016 15:23 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Dime] WGLC #1 for draft-ietf-dime-load-02
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On 6/9/16 8:03 PM, Steve Donovan wrote:
> Jean,
>
> Thanks for the detailed review.  I have made all of the changed
> suggested below.

Thanks!

Jean

>
> Regards,
>
> Steve
>
> On 6/6/16 4:06 PM, A. Jean Mahoney wrote:
>> Hi Steve,
>>
>> Thanks for the doc. I found only nits:
>>
>> Section 2.  Remove "Routing Information - " from the beginning of the
>> Routing Information definition.
>>
>> Section 5 Para 7.      s/next hop/next-hop
>>
>> Section 5 Para 7.      s/do not have/does not have
>>
>> Section 5 Para 10.     s/goal is make/goal is to make
>>
>> Section 5 last para.   s/nodes load/node's load
>>
>> Section 5.1 Para 5.    s/it's own/its own
>>
>> Section 6.1.1 Para 2.  s/it's own/its own
>>
>> Section 6.1.1 Para 2.  s/Source-ID/SourceID
>>
>> Section 6.1.1 Para 4.  s/Value AVP/Load-Value AVP
>>
>> Section 6.1.1 Para 7.  s/endpoints peer/endpoint's peer (2 occurrences)
>>
>> Section 6.1.2 Para 2.  s/it's own/its own
>>
>> Section 6.1.2 Para 2.  s/Source-ID/SourceID
>>
>> Section 6.1.2 Para 4.  s/Value AVP/Load-Value AVP
>>
>> Section 6.2 Para 5.    s/Value AVP/Load-Value AVP
>>
>> Section 6.2 Para 6.    s/Source-ID/SourceID
>>
>>
>> Jean
>>
>>
>> On 5/24/16 10:30 AM, Jouni Korhonen wrote:
>>> Folks,
>>>
>>> This email starts the WGLC #1 for draft-ietf-dime-load-02. Please,
>>> review the document, post your comments to the mailing list and also
>>> insert them into the Issue Tracker with your proposed resolution.
>>>
>>> WGLC starts: 5/24/2016
>>>        ends: 6/7/2016 EOB PDT
>>>
>>> - Jouni & Lionel
>>>
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