Re: [Dime] DOIC document size and placeholders

<lionel.morand@orange.com> Mon, 02 December 2013 16:38 UTC

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To: Maria Cruz Bartolome <maria.cruz.bartolome@ericsson.com>, "dime@ietf.org" <dime@ietf.org>
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Everything informational will not be anyway of great use in a standard tracks document.
So I would also prefer to remove them from the document. Of course, it is not to forget about these points, especially the requirement compliance.

Regards,

Lionel

De : DiME [mailto:dime-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de Maria Cruz Bartolome
Envoyé : lundi 2 décembre 2013 17:09
À : dime@ietf.org
Objet : Re: [Dime] DOIC document size and placeholders

Hello all,

I would agree about removing that, but keep track of conformance is fine.

A part from that, we got some introductory chapters that include some definitions that are not used along the doc in some cases. I would like to suggest again removal of any terminology that is never used, this is misleading for a reader.
As well, I prefer that pure educational chapters are as well removed, or at least move to an annex, clearly state this is just informational.

Best regards
/MCruz


From: DiME [mailto:dime-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Steve Donovan
Sent: lunes, 02 de diciembre de 2013 16:59
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Subject: Re: [Dime] DOIC document size and placeholders

I would prefer to wait to drop the conformance section.  Either that or keep it updated as a separate draft/document to keep us focused on the requirements.

I agree on the S6a and PCC examples.  Much of that information in already contained in either the requirements RFC or 3GGP DOC document.

Steve
On 11/28/13 3:34 AM, lionel.morand@orange.com<mailto:lionel.morand@orange.com> wrote:

agreed



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De : DiME [mailto:dime-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de Jouni Korhonen

Envoyé : jeudi 28 novembre 2013 10:34

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Objet : [Dime] DOIC document size and placeholders



Folks,



We have some hefty sized appendices and some of the placeholders include no text. I was thinking whether we could just drop appendices on:

 o Conformance to Requirements

 o 3GPP S6a interface overload indication - example

 o 3GPP PCC interfaces overload indication - example



They would be very informational nature anyway in a standards track document..



Opinions?



- Jouni

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