Re: [Dime] WGLC #1 for draft-ietf-dime-load-02

"A. Jean Mahoney" <mahoney@nostrum.com> Mon, 06 June 2016 21:06 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Dime] WGLC #1 for draft-ietf-dime-load-02
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Hi Steve,

Thanks for the doc. I found only nits:

Section 2.  Remove "Routing Information - " from the beginning of the 
Routing Information definition.

Section 5 Para 7.      s/next hop/next-hop

Section 5 Para 7.      s/do not have/does not have

Section 5 Para 10.     s/goal is make/goal is to make

Section 5 last para.   s/nodes load/node's load

Section 5.1 Para 5.    s/it's own/its own

Section 6.1.1 Para 2.  s/it's own/its own

Section 6.1.1 Para 2.  s/Source-ID/SourceID

Section 6.1.1 Para 4.  s/Value AVP/Load-Value AVP

Section 6.1.1 Para 7.  s/endpoints peer/endpoint's peer (2 occurrences)

Section 6.1.2 Para 2.  s/it's own/its own

Section 6.1.2 Para 2.  s/Source-ID/SourceID

Section 6.1.2 Para 4.  s/Value AVP/Load-Value AVP

Section 6.2 Para 5.    s/Value AVP/Load-Value AVP

Section 6.2 Para 6.    s/Source-ID/SourceID


Jean


On 5/24/16 10:30 AM, Jouni Korhonen wrote:
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