Re: draft-klensin-unicode-escapes-05 and draft-klensin-net-utf8-05

"Clive D.W. Feather" <clive@demon.net> Mon, 08 October 2007 14:19 UTC

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From: "Clive D.W. Feather" <clive@demon.net>
To: John C Klensin <john-ietf@jck.com>
Subject: Re: draft-klensin-unicode-escapes-05 and draft-klensin-net-utf8-05
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John C Klensin said:
> 
> New versions of these documents have been posted for your
> reading pleasure, reflecting comments and discussions on this
> list (and some private correspondence about editorial issues)
> today.

unicode-escapes section 7 has a spurious closing double quote.

Appendix A.1., comment after "BMP-form", what does "the one above" refer
to?

Nitpick: some slashes in the definition of HEXDIG have a space before them
and some don't. You've also got two spaces after some = and three after
others.

You don't have an A.3 for Java.

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