Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp-websocket-03.txt
Peter Dunkley <peter.dunkley@crocodilertc.net> Sun, 19 January 2014 13:53 UTC
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Subject: Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp-websocket-03.txt
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Hello, Perhaps the document title should be corrected. MSRP-CEMA is outside of the scope of this document as this document is intended to describe connecting to a WebSocket server that is an MSRP relay. I can see no reason why MSRP-CEMA can't be used over WebSockets, but if anyone has an interest in this I think that they should put it in a document of its own. Regards, Peter On 18 January 2014 08:52, Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>wrote: > Hi, > > > > I have not followed the work on this draft, so I appologize if the > following has been discussed. > > > > While I do understand that a WS Client has to establish the WebSocket with > the Web Server, I don’t understand why we need to mandate the WS Server to > be an MSRP Relay. That would e.g. prevent the usage of MSRP-CEMA. > > > > Regards, > > > > Christer > > > > > > > > *Lähettäjä:* dispatch [mailto:dispatch-bounces@ietf.org] *Puolesta *Mary > Barnes > *Lähetetty:* 11. tammikuuta 2014 0:59 > *Vastaanottaja:* DISPATCH > *Kopio:* Ben Campbell; draft-pd-dispatch-msrp-websocket@tools.ietf.org > *Aihe:* Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp-websocket-03.txt > > > > I have agreed to shepherd this document. I've reviewed the document in > anticipation of doing the PROTO write-up and have the following comments > and questions. Ben Campbell has agreed to do the required expert review > and that should be posted within the next week or so. This is also a > good time for anyone in the WG that hasn't previously reviewed this > document to review and provide any final comments. Note, that this > document was agreed to be AD sponsored around the IETF-86 timeframe. > > > > Regards, > > Mary. > > > > Review Summary: Almost ready. Comments & questions below. > > > > 1) Section 2 & General. I'm not sure the documented approach for > separating normative text from non-normative is quite so helpful. In > general, we expect that in the case of standards track document use RFC > 2119 language to indicate normative behaviors. I think the first sentence > is good, but that's not a terminology thing. I just don't see a lot of > value in writing the document this way. For example, the definitions > aren't stated to be non-normative, but I don't see anything normative about > the definitions. I think you could easily title Section 3 as "WebSocket > Protocol overview" and that would clearly imply non-normative behavior. > There are also several places in the document in sections that I believe > are intended to provide normative behavior, but there is certainly > non-normative text in those sections (e.g., section 5.2.2, second > paragraph). I would suggest this document follow the typical (and > accepted) style of identifying normative behavior with 2119 language > (consistently using upper case for normative behavior and avoiding using > 2119 language in cases where alternative words can be substituted). > > > > 2) Section 5.2.2, 2nd paragraph. Related to my point above, it's not > clear to me this is normative behavior. I don't think it is since it's > referring to existing 4975 behavior. However, I didn't see that the > reference given in 4975 relates to the second part of that sentence stating > that implementations "should" already be allowing unrecognized transports. > It would be quite useful to have the exact reference here as I was trying > to double check this point and I couldn't find it. > > > > 3) Section 6. I'm really puzzled as to why the Connection Keep-alive > would be non-normative. In particular given that 2119 language is clearly > being used. > > > > 4) Section 7. Again, I'm puzzled as to why Authentication is considered > non-normative. AGain, you have 2119 language in this section. > > > > 5) Section 10.1. Since securing the connection is just RECOMMENDED, what > are the implications and risks if the MSRP traffic isn't transported over a > secure connection? > > > > 6) Section 11. You should change the name of the registry to be the exact > name of the IANA registry to avoid any confusion.- i.e.,: > > OLD: > > registry of WebSocket sub-protocols > > NEW: > > WebSocket Subprotocol Name Registry > > > > 7) Section 11. There is also a Reference field in that IANA registry. I > would suggest you use the same information as the pointer to the > Subprotocol Definition (i.e., this RFC). > > > > 8) It's typical for documents that are updating existing RFCs to have a > section that summarizes the updates to the existing RFCs that are made by > this document. > > > > > > > > On Thu, Dec 12, 2013 at 6:57 PM, <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote: > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > > > Title : The WebSocket Protocol as a Transport for the > Message Session Relay Protocol (MSRP) > Author(s) : Peter Dunkley > Gavin Llewellyn > Victor Pascual > Anton Roman > Gonzalo Salgueiro > Filename : draft-pd-dispatch-msrp-websocket-03.txt > Pages : 21 > Date : 2013-12-12 > > Abstract: > The WebSocket protocol enables two-way real-time communication > between clients and servers. This document specifies a new WebSocket > sub-protocol as a reliable transport mechanism between MSRP (Message > Session Relay Protocol) clients and relays to enable usage of MSRP in > new scenarios. This document normatively updates RFC 4975 and RFC > 4976. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-pd-dispatch-msrp-websocket > > There's also a htmlized version available at: > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-pd-dispatch-msrp-websocket-03 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-pd-dispatch-msrp-websocket-03 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > _______________________________________________ > I-D-Announce mailing list > I-D-Announce@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i-d-announce > Internet-Draft<https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i-d-announceInternet-Draft>directories: > http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html > or ftp://ftp.ietf.org/ietf/1shadow-sites.txt > > > -- Peter Dunkley Technical Director Crocodile RCS Ltd
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Mary Barnes
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Peter Dunkley
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Ben Campbell
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Peter Dunkley
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Victor Pascual
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Cullen Jennings (fluffy)
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Gonzalo Salgueiro (gsalguei)
- Re: [dispatch] X over websockets Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Peter Dunkley
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Sergio Garcia Murillo
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Mary Barnes
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Sergio Garcia Murillo
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Sergio Garcia Murillo
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Peter Dunkley
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Peter Dunkley
- [dispatch] X over websockets Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [dispatch] X over websockets Sergio Garcia Murillo
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Sergio Garcia Murillo
- Re: [dispatch] X over websockets Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [dispatch] X over websockets Peter Dunkley
- Re: [dispatch] X over websockets Sergio Garcia Murillo
- Re: [dispatch] X over websockets Peter Dunkley
- Re: [dispatch] X over websockets Sergio Garcia Murillo
- Re: [dispatch] X over websockets Peter Dunkley
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Sergio Garcia Murillo
- Re: [dispatch] X over websockets Mary Barnes
- Re: [dispatch] X over websockets Mary Barnes
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Cullen Jennings
- Re: [dispatch] X over websockets Cullen Jennings
- Re: [dispatch] I-D Action: draft-pd-dispatch-msrp… Peter Dunkley
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