[dispatch] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs-13: (with COMMENT)

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Subject: [dispatch] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs-13: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dispatch-javascript-mjs-13: No Objection

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The MUST in Section 2 is kind of peculiar.  Is it a reminder to implementers
today that they need to keep an eye out for possible updates in the future?  If
so, I think it's unnecessary.  If something else is meant, then I'm quite
confused.

In several of the subsections of Section 6.2, there are some errant punctuation
characters hanging around.

This document is registering media subtypes starting with "x-" even though BCP
178 says not to do that.  If the working group intends to do this for
historical reasons, I suggest including a sentence explaining that this is
being done intentionally, perhaps under Appendix A of RFC 6838.  (See, for
example, Section 6 of RFC 8894.)