Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

[Alessandro Vesely <[e-mail]>]

On Sat 10/Oct/2020 00:52:14 +0200 Tim Wicinski wrote:
> 
> Here's the link to the diff.
> 
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08&url2=draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-09


For a nit:

    o  Provides controls to mitigate potential privacy considerations
       associated with this extension

I don't think one would mitigate considerations.  Either address 
considerations, or mitigate leakage.


In Section 4.1:
OLD:
                                                              Feedback
    Reports carry more detailed information and present a greater risk.

NEW:
                                                              Failure
    Reports carry more detailed information and present a greater risk.


The title of Appendix A is misleading.  The experiment is not limited to 
privacy concerns.  Shouldn't it be entitled just "The Experiment"?


Later in Appendix A:

    o  Section 3.2 modifies policy discovery to add an additional DNS
       lookup.

Isn't that Section 3.5 «Changes in Section 6.6.3 "Policy Discovery"»?


Best
Ale
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