[dmarc-ietf] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-eaiauth-03

Tim Evens via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 11 March 2019 22:54 UTC

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Reviewer: Tim Evens
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-dmarc-eaiauth-??
Reviewer: Tim Evens
Review Date: 2019-03-11
IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-14
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:
Ready with nits.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Throughout the draft, section references (html rendering) does not correctly
HREF the RFC and section.  For example, page-5 Section 6 has a reference to
section 6.6.1 of RFC7489, but the HTML rendering HREF links to this draft
instead of correctly linking to RFC7489 Section 6.6.1. Ideally the references
should link correctly, for example on page-3 Section 4 with "Section 3 of
[RFC7208]."