Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

"Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com> Fri, 29 January 2021 06:44 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08
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On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 5:01 PM Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:

> Since this is an experiment, Appendix A discusses the updates that
> happen.  we don't actually say explicitly "if the experiment is a success,
> the following changes will be made" and perhaps I should add some wording
> like that.
>

Something like this, perhaps?

"A standards track update to [RFC7489] will take into account the results
of this experiment."

... somewhere in Section 1.

-MSK