Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08

Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> Sat, 23 January 2021 02:44 UTC

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From: Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 22 Jan 2021 21:44:05 -0500
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Subject: Re: [dmarc-ietf] [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-08
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(this is really for Murray)

On Fri, Jan 22, 2021 at 6:25 PM Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>
wrote:

>
> Looks good to me where it is.  I would add "(PSL)", introducing the
> acronym, right after its first use if we decide to leave it there.
>
> A formatting thing to take care of at some point: Anyplace you refer to
> DMARC, the protocol, just have it as "DMARC" (e.g., "not exempt from DMARC
> policy"); anyplace you refer to DMARC, the specification (e.g., "Section
> a.b.c of DMARC" or similar), it should be the <xref target="..."> ...
> </xref> sorta deal so that it pops out as a reference.
>
>
So the xref for RFC7489 were created of this form:

<xref target="RFC7489">DMARC</xref>

and submitted into the submission system, the HTML document will have this look:


DMARC [RFC7489]   (Link is mapped to [RFC7489])

and the HTML is

[<a href="./rfc7489" title="&quot;Domain-based Message Authentication,
Reporting, and Conformance (DMARC)&quot;">RFC7489</a>]However, when I
run xml2rfc (v3.5.0) locally the


However, when I run xml2rfc (v3.5.0) locally, the HTML shows the text
"DMARC" as a link

and the HTML is

<a href="#RFC7489" class="xref">DMARC</a>


So this makes my brain hurt. I'm going to revisit this in the morning.

tim