[dmarc-ietf] WGLC ARC-16 minor change to Section 7.2.2 for DMARC Reporting

Seth Blank <seth@sethblank.com> Wed, 25 July 2018 22:06 UTC

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Subject: [dmarc-ietf] WGLC ARC-16 minor change to Section 7.2.2 for DMARC Reporting
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https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dmarc-arc-protocol-16#section-7.2.2

The example comment

      <comment>arc=pass ams[2].d=d2.example ams[2].s=s1
        as[2].d=d2.example as[2].s=s2 as[1].d=d1.example
        as[1].s=s3 client-ip[1]=10.10.10.13</comment>

Doesn't match the descriptive text before it. To fix it, the ams[2]
portions should be removed.