[dmarc-ietf] Adam Roach's Yes on draft-ietf-dmarc-arc-protocol-21: (with COMMENT)

[Adam Roach <[e-mail]>]

Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-dmarc-arc-protocol-21: Yes

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COMMENT:
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Thanks to everyone for the work that went into this document. I'm excited by
this experiment, and hope it eventually grows into something we can put on the
standards track.

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id-nits reports:

  ** There are 3 instances of too long lines in the document, the longest one
     being 15 characters in excess of 72.

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§7.2:

>       remote-ip[1]=10.10.10.13</comment>

Please consider using an IPv6 address here. See
https://www.iab.org/2016/11/07/iab-statement-on-ipv6/

In any case, please use an address from the ranges reserved by either RFC 5737
or (preferably) RFC 3849.

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Appendix B:

> Received: from example.org (example.org [208.69.40.157])
...
> Received: from segv.d1.example (segv.d1.example [72.52.75.15])
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> Received: from [10.10.10.131] (w-x-y-z.dsl.static.isp.com [w.x.y.z])
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>     [208.69.40.157]) by clochette.example.org with ESMTP id


The two comments I made on §7.2 apply to these four IP addresses as well.