Re: [dmarc-ietf] ABNF update to dmarc-psd

Dave Crocker <dcrocker@gmail.com> Mon, 07 June 2021 22:26 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dmarc-ietf] ABNF update to dmarc-psd
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On 6/7/2021 3:10 PM, Tim Wicinski wrote:
>      dmarc-nprequest =  "np" *WSP "=" *WSP
>          ( "none" / "quarantine" / "reject" )

I suggest adding a comment that makes the linkage of 'nprequest' to the 
prose text explicit.

d/

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