Re: [dmarc-ietf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-11.txt

Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> Sat, 20 March 2021 00:18 UTC

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From: Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 19 Mar 2021 20:17:52 -0400
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Subject: Re: [dmarc-ietf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dmarc-psd-11.txt
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Agree with Murray.

Also, I see changing "Algorithm" to "Specification" makes sense.

looking at the other suggestions

tim

On Fri, Mar 19, 2021 at 7:54 PM Murray S. Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>
wrote:

> Just to nit-pick:
>
> On Fri, Mar 19, 2021 at 9:28 AM Alessandro Vesely <vesely@tana.it> wrote:
>
>> There's still a few style points that I'd propose.  They can be dealt
>> with in
>> auth48.
>>
>
> After Last Call, please.  Don't wait for AUTH48 to process this feedback.
>
> -MSK
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