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Hi John,

Could you please confirm if you plan to address the following specific
comments from Xavier de Foy?

- Section 3.1: Change /end-user (UE) sessions/PDU sessions/ and consider
describing the meaning of "PDU session" at its first occurrence.
- Change /to that signaled for the PDU session/to the S-NSSAI signaled for
the PDU session/

I was unable to find the resolutions for these particular points in the
latest diff and your slides in the last DMM meeting.

Thanks,
--satoru

On Tue, Nov 4, 2025 at 11:22=E2=80=AFPM Kaippallimalil John <
john.kaippallimalil@futurewei.com> wrote:

> Hi Xavier,
>
>
> Thank you for the comments and support.
>
>
>
> Please see the new revision that implements the suggested changes below.
>
> Link to diff:
>
>
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lity-23>
>
>
>
> Best Regards,
>
> John
>
>
>
>
>
> *From:* Xavier de Foy <x.defoy.ietf@gmail.com>
> *Sent:* Wednesday, October 29, 2025 11:35 AM
> *To:* Satoru Matsushima <satoru.matsushima@gmail.com>; dmm-chairs@ietf.or=
g;
> dmm@ietf.org; draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility@ietf.org
> *Subject:* Re: [DMM] Re: WG Last Call:
> draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-22 (Ends 2025-10-30)
>
>
>
> I support the publication of draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility and provide
> a few minor comments below, for the authors' consideration.
>
>
>
>
>
> - #1: /map a 3GPP slice to a slice in an IP transport network provider/ma=
p
> a 3GPP slice to a slice in an IP transport network/ -OR- /map a 3GPP slic=
e
> to an  IP transport network slice at a provider edge/
>
> - #3.1: /end-user (UE) sessions/PDU sessions/, because the term PDU
> session is used multiple times in the document already.
>   - Note: consider expanding the term UE as User Equipment in the first
> occurence of the term in the draft.
>   - Note: consider describing the meaning of PDU session at the first
> occurence of the term.
>
> - #3.3: consider adding text to define what EP_transport is. E.g., /3GPP
> user plane nodes (gNB, UPF) are provisioned with GTP transport interface
> information parameters in [TS.28.541-3GPP]./3GPP user plane nodes (gNB,
> UPF) are provisioned with GTP end point transport (EP_transport) interfac=
e
> information parameters in [TS.28.541-3GPP]./
> - #3.3: a few sentences could be clarified a bit,I try illustrating below
> a few points.
>   - "Each EP_Transport is configured with ATTACHMENT_CIRCUIT containing
> UDP source port number/range for each of the slices (S-NSSAI) supported b=
y
> the 3GPP user plane node." Maybe: "Each EP_Transport is configured with a=
n
> ATTACHMENT_CIRCUIT containing UDP source port number/range corresponding =
to
> a slice (S-NSSAI) supported by the 3GPP user plane node."
>   - "This S-NSSAI in the user plane setup can be used to associate with
> the previously configured EP_Transport information per S-NSSAI." Maybe:
> "This S-NSSAI in the user plane setup can be associated with one of the
> previously configured per-S-NSSAI EP_Transport information."
>   - /to that signaled for the PDU session/to the S-NSSAI signaled for the
> PDU session/
>
> - #4: About the paragraph "In some E2E scenarios, security is desired
> granularly...", I was wondering if the text could cover something more
> general than security, e.g., "In some E2E scenarios, additional path
> characteristics may be desired in the underlying transport network, such =
as
> security characteristics.". The rest of the paragraph may be adapted
> correspondingly, if you agree with this comment. One example of
> non-security characteristic that comes to mind is regulatory/legal, e.g.,
> the physical location of the path (and this does not need to be spelled o=
ut
> in the text, this is just for illustrating where my comment comes from).
>
> - #6: /authenticaiton/authentication/
>
>
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Xavier
>
>
>
> On Wed, Oct 29, 2025 at 7:23=E2=80=AFAM Kaippallimalil John <
> john.kaippallimalil@futurewei.com> wrote:
>
> draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility provides a solution to support the
> capabilities offered by 5G slices across IP transport networks that
> backhaul the traffic.
>
> As an author, I believe this draft is ready for publication.
>
>
>
> Best Regards,
>
> John
>
>
>
> *From:* Satoru Matsushima <satoru.matsushima@gmail.com>
> *Sent:* Friday, October 24, 2025 4:52 PM
> *To:* Satoru Matsushima <satoru.matsushima@gmail.com>
> *Cc:* dmm-chairs@ietf.org; dmm@ietf.org;
> draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility@ietf.org
> *Subject:* Re: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-22 (Ends
> 2025-10-30)
>
>
>
> DMMer,
>
>
>
> Let me remind you that the mobility-aware transport draft is now in WGLC.
> It will end on Oct. 30, so please review the draft.
>
> You can use this thread to send your feedback.
>
>
>
> Cheers,
>
> --satoru
>
>
>
> On Thu, Oct 16, 2025 at 9:09=E2=80=AFPM Satoru Matsushima via Datatracker=
 <
> noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>
> Subject: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-22 (Ends
> 2025-10-30)
>
> This message starts a 2-week WG Last Call for this document.
>
> Abstract:
>    Network slicing in 5G enables logical networks for communication
>    services of multiple 5G customers to be multiplexed over the same
>    infrastructure.  While 5G slicing covers logical separation of
>    various aspects of 5G infrastructure and services, user's data plane
>    packets over the Radio Access Network (RAN) and Core Network (5GC)
>    use IP in many segments of an end-to-end 5G slice.  When end-to-end
>    slices in a 5G System use network resources, they are mapped to
>    corresponding IP transport network slice(s) which in turn provide the
>    bandwidth, latency, isolation, and other criteria required for the
>    realization of a 5G slice.
>
>    This document describes mapping of 5G slices to transport network
>    slices using UDP source port number of the GTP-U bearer when the IP
>    transport network (slice provider) is separated by an "attachment
>    circuit" from the networks in which the 5G network functions are
>    deployed, for example, 5G functions that are distributed across data
>    centers.  The slice mapping defined here is supported transparently
>    when a 5G user device moves across 5G attachment points and session
>    anchors.
>
> File can be retrieved from:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility/
>
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<div dir=3D"ltr"><div>Hi John,</div><div><br></div><div>Could you please co=
nfirm if you plan to address the following specific comments from Xavier de=
 Foy?</div><div><br></div><div>  - Section 3.1: Change /end-user (UE) sessi=
ons/PDU sessions/ and consider describing the meaning of &quot;PDU session&=
quot; at its first occurrence.</div><div>  - Change /to that signaled for t=
he PDU session/to the S-NSSAI signaled for the PDU session/</div><div><br><=
/div><div>I was unable to find the resolutions for these particular points =
in the latest diff and your slides in the last DMM meeting.</div><div><br><=
/div><div>Thanks,</div><div>--satoru</div></div><br><div class=3D"gmail_quo=
te gmail_quote_container"><div dir=3D"ltr" class=3D"gmail_attr">On Tue, Nov=
 4, 2025 at 11:22=E2=80=AFPM Kaippallimalil John &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:john=
.kaippallimalil@futurewei.com">john.kaippallimalil@futurewei.com</a>&gt; wr=
ote:<br></div><blockquote class=3D"gmail_quote" style=3D"margin:0px 0px 0px=
 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div class=
=3D"msg-8372609505521162702">





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<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Hi Xavier,<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><br>
Thank you for the comments and support.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Please see the new revision that implements the sugg=
ested changes below.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Link to diff:<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"m_-8372609505521162702MsoPlainText"><a href=3D"https://author-t=
ools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-23" target=3D"=
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Best Regards,<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">John<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri=
,sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Cali=
bri,sans-serif"> Xavier de Foy &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:x.defoy.ietf@gmail.com=
" target=3D"_blank">x.defoy.ietf@gmail.com</a>&gt;
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Wednesday, October 29, 2025 11:35 AM<br>
<b>To:</b> Satoru Matsushima &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:satoru.matsushima@gmail.=
com" target=3D"_blank">satoru.matsushima@gmail.com</a>&gt;; <a href=3D"mail=
to:dmm-chairs@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">dmm-chairs@ietf.org</a>; <a href=
=3D"mailto:dmm@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">dmm@ietf.org</a>; <a href=3D"mai=
lto:draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">draft-ietf=
-dmm-tn-aware-mobility@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: [DMM] Re: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobilit=
y-22 (Ends 2025-10-30)<u></u><u></u></span></p>
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<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">I support the publication of draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware=
-mobility and provide a few minor comments below, for the authors&#39; cons=
ideration. =C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal" style=3D"margin-bottom:12pt">- #1: /map a 3GPP slice=
 to a slice in an IP transport network provider/map a 3GPP slice to a slice=
 in an IP transport network/ -OR- /map a 3GPP slice to an=C2=A0 IP transpor=
t network slice at a provider edge/<br>
<br>
- #3.1: /end-user (UE) sessions/PDU sessions/, because the term PDU session=
 is used multiple times in the document already.<br>
=C2=A0 - Note: consider expanding the term UE as User Equipment in the firs=
t occurence of the term in the draft.<br>
=C2=A0 - Note: consider describing the meaning of PDU session at the first =
occurence of the term.<br>
=C2=A0 <br>
- #3.3: consider adding text to define what EP_transport is. E.g., /3GPP us=
er plane nodes (gNB, UPF) are provisioned with GTP transport interface info=
rmation parameters in [TS.28.541-3GPP]./3GPP user plane nodes (gNB, UPF) ar=
e provisioned with GTP end point
 transport (EP_transport) interface information parameters in [TS.28.541-3G=
PP]./<br>
- #3.3: a few sentences could be clarified a bit,I try illustrating below a=
 few points.<br>
=C2=A0 - &quot;Each EP_Transport is configured with ATTACHMENT_CIRCUIT cont=
aining UDP source port number/range for each of the slices (S-NSSAI) suppor=
ted by the 3GPP user plane node.&quot; Maybe: &quot;Each EP_Transport is co=
nfigured with an ATTACHMENT_CIRCUIT containing UDP source
 port number/range corresponding to a slice (S-NSSAI) supported by the 3GPP=
 user plane node.&quot;<br>
=C2=A0 - &quot;This S-NSSAI in the user plane setup can be used to associat=
e with the previously configured EP_Transport information per S-NSSAI.&quot=
; Maybe: &quot;This S-NSSAI in the user plane setup can be associated with =
one of the previously configured per-S-NSSAI EP_Transport
 information.&quot;<br>
=C2=A0 - /to that signaled for the PDU session/to the S-NSSAI signaled for =
the PDU session/<br>
<br>
- #4: About the paragraph &quot;In some E2E scenarios, security is desired =
granularly...&quot;, I was wondering if the text could cover something more=
 general than security, e.g., &quot;In some E2E scenarios, additional path =
characteristics may be desired in the underlying
 transport network, such as security characteristics.&quot;. The rest of th=
e paragraph may be adapted correspondingly, if you agree with this comment.=
 One example of non-security characteristic that comes to mind is regulator=
y/legal, e.g., the physical location
 of the path (and this does not need to be spelled out in the text, this is=
 just for illustrating where my comment comes from).<u></u><u></u></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">- #6: /authenticaiton/authentication/<u></u><u></u><=
/p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Best Regards,<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Xavier<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><u></u>=C2=A0<u></u></p>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">On Wed, Oct 29, 2025 at 7:23<span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:Arial,sans-serif">=E2=80=AF</span>AM Kaippallimalil John &lt;<a href=3D"=
mailto:john.kaippallimalil@futurewei.com" target=3D"_blank">john.kaippallim=
alil@futurewei.com</a>&gt; wrote:<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
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<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility provides a solution=
 to support the capabilities offered by 5G slices across IP transport netwo=
rks that backhaul the traffic.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">As an author, I believe this draft is ready for publ=
ication.<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Best Regards,<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">John<u></u><u></u></p>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<div style=3D"border-top:none currentcolor;border-right:none currentcolor;b=
order-bottom:none currentcolor;border-left:1.5pt solid blue;padding:0in 0in=
 0in 4pt">
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r;border-left:none currentcolor;border-top:1pt solid currentcolor;padding:3=
pt 0in 0in">
<p class=3D"MsoNormal"><b><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Calibri=
,sans-serif">From:</span></b><span style=3D"font-size:11pt;font-family:Cali=
bri,sans-serif"> Satoru Matsushima &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:satoru.matsushima@=
gmail.com" target=3D"_blank">satoru.matsushima@gmail.com</a>&gt;
<br>
<b>Sent:</b> Friday, October 24, 2025 4:52 PM<br>
<b>To:</b> Satoru Matsushima &lt;<a href=3D"mailto:satoru.matsushima@gmail.=
com" target=3D"_blank">satoru.matsushima@gmail.com</a>&gt;<br>
<b>Cc:</b> <a href=3D"mailto:dmm-chairs@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">dmm-cha=
irs@ietf.org</a>;
<a href=3D"mailto:dmm@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">dmm@ietf.org</a>; <a href=
=3D"mailto:draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">
draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility@ietf.org</a><br>
<b>Subject:</b> Re: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-22 (Ends=
 2025-10-30)</span><u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">DMMer,<u></u><u></u></p>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Let me remind you that the mobility-aware transport =
draft is now in WGLC. It will end on Oct. 30, so please review=C2=A0the dra=
ft.<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">You can use this thread to=C2=A0send your feedback.=
=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">Cheers,<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">--satoru<u></u><u></u></p>
</div>
</div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">=C2=A0<u></u><u></u></p>
<div>
<div>
<p class=3D"MsoNormal">On Thu, Oct 16, 2025 at 9:09<span style=3D"font-fami=
ly:Arial,sans-serif">=E2=80=AF</span>PM Satoru Matsushima via Datatracker &=
lt;<a href=3D"mailto:noreply@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">noreply@ietf.org</=
a>&gt;
 wrote:<u></u><u></u></p>
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Subject: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobility-22 (Ends 2025-10-30=
)<br>
<br>
This message starts a 2-week WG Last Call for this document.<br>
<br>
Abstract:<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0Network slicing in 5G enables logical networks for communicati=
on<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0services of multiple 5G customers to be multiplexed over the s=
ame<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0infrastructure.=C2=A0 While 5G slicing covers logical separati=
on of<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0various aspects of 5G infrastructure and services, user&#39;s =
data plane<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0packets over the Radio Access Network (RAN) and Core Network (=
5GC)<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0use IP in many segments of an end-to-end 5G slice.=C2=A0 When =
end-to-end<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0slices in a 5G System use network resources, they are mapped t=
o<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0corresponding IP transport network slice(s) which in turn prov=
ide the<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0bandwidth, latency, isolation, and other criteria required for=
 the<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0realization of a 5G slice.<br>
<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0This document describes mapping of 5G slices to transport netw=
ork<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0slices using UDP source port number of the GTP-U bearer when t=
he IP<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0transport network (slice provider) is separated by an &quot;at=
tachment<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0circuit&quot; from the networks in which the 5G network functi=
ons are<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0deployed, for example, 5G functions that are distributed acros=
s data<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0centers.=C2=A0 The slice mapping defined here is supported tra=
nsparently<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0when a 5G user device moves across 5G attachment points and se=
ssion<br>
=C2=A0 =C2=A0anchors.<br>
<br>
File can be retrieved from:<br>
<a href=3D"https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aware-mobilit=
y/" target=3D"_blank">https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dmm-tn-aw=
are-mobility/</a><br>
<br>
Please review and indicate your support or objection to proceed with the<br=
>
publication of this document by replying to this email keeping <a href=3D"m=
ailto:dmm@ietf.org" target=3D"_blank">
dmm@ietf.org</a><br>
in copy. Objections should be motivated and suggestions to resolve them are=
<br>
highly appreciated.<br>
<br>
Authors, and WG participants in general, are reminded again of the<br>
Intellectual Property Rights (IPR) disclosure obligations described in BCP =
79<br>
[1]. Appropriate IPR disclosures required for full conformance with the<br>
provisions of BCP 78 [1] and BCP 79 [2] must be filed, if you are aware of<=
br>
any. Sanctions available for application to violators of IETF IPR Policy ca=
n<br>
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