[DMM] Light review of draft-ietf-dmm-fpc-cpdp-12

Carlos Jesús Bernardos Cano <cjbc@it.uc3m.es> Sun, 04 November 2018 04:28 UTC

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From: Carlos Jesús Bernardos Cano <cjbc@it.uc3m.es>
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To: Lyle Bertz <lyleb551144@gmail.com>, Marco Liebsch <marco.liebsch@netlab.nec.de>
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Subject: [DMM] Light review of draft-ietf-dmm-fpc-cpdp-12
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Hi Lyle, Marco,

I committed to perform a review of the FPC draft. Though I have not
been able to perform an in-depth one in time for Bangkok, please find
attached a light one (among other things, I have not gone through the
annexes).

I don't have major comments. I think the use of normative text should
be improved, as there are parts that are not clear if the text is
supposed to be normative or not.

Thanks, talk to you next week.

Carlos