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Re: [DMM] Review of draft-ietf-dmm-srv6-mobile-uplane-07

Satoru Matsushima <satoru.matsushima@gmail.com> Tue, 23 June 2020 08:06 UTC

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Hi Carlos,

Thanks for your review.
The authors will address your comments and get back to you when the decription is failed. :-)
Before that the draft needs to be back from expire state. So authors, please submit a revision with minimum update.

Cheers,
--satoru

> 2020/06/23 2:15、CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es>のメール:
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> Hi Pablo, all,
> 
> Please find attached my review of the draft. I think it specifies very useful stuff. Some points about the way it's presented can be improved, IMHO.
> 
> I hope you don't mind that I made my comments handwritten (which you might also think are encrypted ;) ) on the PDF version of the draft.
> 
> If you have any questions about my comments, do not hesitate contacting me.
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> Carlos
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