Re: [DMM] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmm-pmipv6-dlif-04

CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es> Sat, 02 November 2019 11:45 UTC

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From: CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es>
Date: Sat, 2 Nov 2019 12:44:50 +0100
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To: Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com>
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Subject: Re: [DMM] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmm-pmipv6-dlif-04
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Hi Ines,

We've just posted a new revision addressing your comments.

Thanks,

Carlos

On Fri, Oct 18, 2019 at 1:21 PM CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es>;
wrote:

> Hi Ines,
>
> Thanks for the review. We'll check with IANA folks about how to add more
> details (whether they do it or we do).
>
> Thanks,
>
> Carlos
>
> On Mon, Oct 14, 2019 at 10:21 PM Ines Robles via Datatracker <
> noreply@ietf.org>; wrote:
>
>> Reviewer: Ines Robles
>> Review result: Ready with Nits
>>
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
>> like any other last call comments.
>>
>> For more information, please see the FAQ at
>>
>> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>;.
>>
>> Document: draft-ietf-dmm-pmipv6-dlif-04
>> Reviewer: Ines Robles
>> Review Date: 2019-10-14
>> IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-14
>> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>>
>> Summary:
>>
>> I believe the draft is technically good. This document is well written.
>>
>> The document proposes Distributed Mobility Management for Proxy Mobile
>> IPv6 in
>> which mobility sessions are anchored at the last IP hop router called MAAR
>> (mobility anchor and access router). The document focuses on the required
>> extensions to effectively support simultaneously anchoring several flows
>> at
>> different distributed gateways.
>>
>> I have a minor concern detailed in Nits section.
>>
>> Major issues:Not Issues found
>>
>> Minor issues: Not Issues found
>>
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>>
>> It would be nice to specify IANA Section with more details, such as
>> indicating
>> the registry which the option type belong, etc. [rfc8126]
>>
>> Thank you for this document,
>>
>> Ines.
>>
>>
>>
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