[DMM] Review of draft-ietf-dmm-srv6-mobile-uplane-07

CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es> Mon, 22 June 2020 17:16 UTC

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Hi Pablo, all,

Please find attached my review of the draft. I think it specifies very
useful stuff. Some points about the way it's presented can be improved,
IMHO.

I hope you don't mind that I made my comments handwritten (which you might
also think are encrypted ;) ) on the PDF version of the draft.

If you have any questions about my comments, do not hesitate contacting me.

Thanks!

Carlos