Re: [DMM] Mirja_Kühlewind's_No_Objection_on_draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum-06:_(with_COMMENT)
" Z.W. Yan " <yan@cnnic.cn> Mon, 06 March 2017 02:13 UTC
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Subject: Re: [DMM] Mirja_Kühlewind's_No_Objection_on_draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum-06:_(with_COMMENT)
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Hello, Mirja, Thank you for the review and comments on this draft, please check my in-line responses below. 2017-03-06 Z.W. Yan 发件人： Mirja_Kühlewind 发送时间： 2017-03-01 02:08:21 收件人： The IESG 抄送： draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum; dmm-chairs; dmm; max.ldp 主题： [DMM] Mirja_Kühlewind's_No_Objection_on_draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum-06:_(with_COMMENT) Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum-06: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dmm-hnprenum/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- This document has a 2119 boilerplate but doesn't use normative language. I think it would actually be good to use normative language! Minor questions: - secion 4: "This temporary binding should only be used for the downwards packet transmission" By downward you mean 'to the MN', right? Why is this? Does that actually help in any scenario? *** You are right, the presentaion "This temporary binding should only be used for the downwards packet transmission and the LMA should stop broadcasting the routing information about the old HNP if the old HNP is no longer anchored at this LMA." may cause confusion and it will be revised as "And the LMA MUST stop broadcasting the routing information about the old HNP if the old HNP is no longer anchored at this LMA." - I'm not sure why section 3 is titled 'PMIPv6 Extensions'...? *** Is "HNP Renumbering Procedure" better? _______________________________________________ dmm mailing list dmm@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dmm
- Re: [DMM] Mirja_Kühlewind's_No_Objection_on_draft… Z.W. Yan
- Re: [DMM] Mirja_Kühlewind's_No_Objection_on_draft… Mirja Kuehlewind (IETF)