Re: [DMM] Fwd: WGLC on draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-11

I had agreed to review this draft at the last IETF in Bangkok – so here it is.

After reading the draft again, I think it is well written and ready to move forward.

A few minor comments for consideration:

-           3.1.2, "the MN's chooses as source IP address of packets belonging to an IP flow, an address allocated by the network the MN is attached to when the flow was initiated"

The sentence does not read well. The intention is probably that “the MN chooses a source IP address for packets …..” or something similar?

-          4.1., "Regardless of whether IP mobility is needed, if the flow has terminated before the MN moves to a new network, the flow may subsequently restart using the new IP address assigned from the new network."

Should the sentence be saying, "... if the flow has not terminated ...."

-          4.2., For references to [Paper-Distributed.Mobility], [Paper-Distributed.Mobility.PMIP] and [Paper-Distributed.Mobility.Review]: would it be possible to give a sentence on the key point of each.  It would be easier for reading.

BR,
John

From: dmm [mailto:dmm-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Arashmid Akhavain
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Subject: Re: [DMM] Fwd: WGLC on draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-11

Yes, +1, I support this draft

Arashmid

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From: Sri Gundavelli (sgundave) <sgundave@cisco.com<mailto:sgundave@cisco.com>>
Date: Wed, Jan 9, 2019 at 7:43 PM
Subject: [DMM] WGLC on draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-11
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Folks – As we discussed in the WG meeting at IETF103, we are issuing WGLC on draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-11.

The document went through several revisions and there were good amount of reviews on this document.  The authors have addressed all the comments and there are no open issues that we are tracking at this time. We believe the document is ready for IESG reviews and like to confirm the same from the working group.

The following message commences a two week WGLC for all feedback.

Document Link:
https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-11.txt<https://na01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Fid%2Fdraft-ietf-dmm-distributed-mobility-anchoring-11.txt&data=02%7C01%7CAkbar.Rahman%40InterDigital.com%7C259985cba37b4299215c08d67adaa9ae%7Ce351b779f6d54e50856880e922d180ae%7C0%7C0%7C636831476918598320&sdata=9J31DyPXczsZw4wWHmFYRM3QPTeYb8oMNgs1%2BAxNhhY%3D&reserved=0>

The target status for this document is “Informational”.

Please post any comments/concerns on the draft.

Thanks!
Dapeng & Sri

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