Re: [dns-privacy] Suresh Krishnan's No Objection on draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-08: (with COMMENT)

[Sara Dickinson <[e-mail]>]

> On 4 Mar 2020, at 13:54, Suresh Krishnan <[e-mail]> wrote:
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>> On Mar 4, 2020, at 8:31 AM, Sara Dickinson <[e-mail]> wrote:
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>>> On 6 Feb 2020, at 05:33, Suresh Krishnan via Datatracker <[e-mail]> wrote:
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>>> Suresh Krishnan has entered the following ballot position for
>>> draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-08: No Objection
>>> 
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>>> COMMENT:
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>>> * Section 5.2.3.
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>>> I found Table 1 to be extremely confusing. It is not clear from the table
>>> whether all of the properties are concurrently applicable to a certain
>>> technique when an "X" appears there. e.g. TC has marks for Format preserving,
>>> Prefix preserving, Reordering/Shuffling, and Random substitution. Some of these
>>> seem to be mutually exclusive. It would be good if you can clarify.
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>> That was the intention of the table. TC (TCPdpriv - described in detail in Appendix B.3) preserves both the format and the longest prefix match but uses a random replacement for the remainder of the address.
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>> Alissa suggested moving the table to Appendix B so it is in the context of the more detailed definitions of the categories and the individual techniques. I think that is a good idea - do you think that would address your concern?
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> Thanks Sara. That would work.

Great - thank you!

Sara.