Re: [dns-privacy] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-06: (with COMMENT)

Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 08 October 2020 13:01 UTC

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From: Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 8 Oct 2020 09:00:55 -0400
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Subject: Re: [dns-privacy] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-06: (with COMMENT)
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Rob

On Mon, Oct 5, 2020 at 8:40 AM Robert Wilton via Datatracker <
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> Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-06: No Objection
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> Hi,
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> Thank you for this document.  I found it interesting and easy to read.
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> A few minor comments/nits that I spotted whilst reading this document:
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> "in clear (i.e., unencrypted)." => "unencrypted."
> "However there is" => "However, there is"
> "designed for TCP, not UDP and new" => "designed for TCP, not UDP, and new"
> "It can be noted also that" => "It can also be noted that"
> "Both are a big privacy concern" => "Both are significant privacy concerns"
> "de-NAT DNS queries dns-de-nat [3]" => "de-NAT DNS queries [3]"?
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Thanks for these - the last one appears to be a markdown reference fail.
I'll make sure it's worked out

thanks
tim

> Regards,
> Rob
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