[dns-privacy] draft-ietf-dprive-dtls-and-tls-profiles: configuration

"Paul Hoffman" <paul.hoffman@vpnc.org> Sat, 22 October 2016 23:32 UTC

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Subject: [dns-privacy] draft-ietf-dprive-dtls-and-tls-profiles: configuration
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Greetings. Someone reading this document for the first time might not 
understand where the DNS name that is being discussed in the main body 
of the document was found. It is not until Section 8 ("Out of Band 
Sources of Domain Name") that this is mentioned, and that feels much too 
late.

The document might be much more approachable if Section 8 was moved to 
immediately after Section 3, and if it was re-titled "Configuration of 
the Domain Name for Verification".

--Paul Hoffman