From: Sara Dickinson <sara@sinodun.com>
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Date: Fri, 28 Oct 2016 16:57:33 +0100
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Subject: Re: [dns-privacy] I-D Action:
 draft-ietf-dprive-dtls-and-tls-profiles-07.txt
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Hi All,=20

This version includes the following changes motivated by the discussion =
on SPKI pinsets

- Re-work of the Abstract and Introduction to better describe the =
contents in this version
- Terminology: New definition of =E2=80=9Cauthentication information"
- Scope: Changes to the Scope section
- Moved discussion of combining authentication mechanism earlier
- Changes to the section headings and groupings to make the presentation =
more logical

This was mostly moving things around but there is some new text, =
particularly in the Introduction and it does slightly change the flow of =
the document. Paul - I haven=E2=80=99t moved the =E2=80=98source of =
domain names=E2=80=99 earlier as I think it is in better context where =
it is in this version but please let me know what you think.

I hope this improves the overall readability but another round of =
reviews would be most welcome.=20

It doesn=E2=80=99t contain any changes to the description of =
Opportunistic Security which is still under discussion on the list.

Sara. =20


> On 28 Oct 2016, at 16:54, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts =
directories.
> This draft is a work item of the DNS PRIVate Exchange of the IETF.
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>        Title           : Authentication and (D)TLS Profile for =
DNS-over-(D)TLS
>        Authors         : Sara Dickinson
>                          Daniel Kahn Gillmor
>                          Tirumaleswar Reddy
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-dprive-dtls-and-tls-profiles-07.txt
> 	Pages           : 23
> 	Date            : 2016-10-28
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> Abstract:
>   This document discusses Usage Profiles, based on one or more
>   authentication mechanisms, which can be used for DNS over Transport
>   Layer Security (TLS) or Datagram TLS (DTLS).  This document also
>   specifies new authentication mechanisms - it describes several ways =
a
>   DNS client can use an authentication domain name to authenticate a
>   DNS server.  Additionally, it defines (D)TLS profiles for DNS =
clients
>   and servers implementing DNS-over-(D)TLS.
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> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> =
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-dtls-and-tls-profiles/
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> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dprive-dtls-and-tls-profiles-07
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> A diff from the previous version is available at:
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https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=3Ddraft-ietf-dprive-dtls-and-tls-profile=
s-07
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> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of =
submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
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> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
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