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Re: [dns-privacy] New Version Notification - draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12.txt

Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu> Thu, 28 April 2022 13:02 UTC

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From: Bob Harold <rharolde@umich.edu>
Date: Thu, 28 Apr 2022 09:02:09 -0400
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Subject: Re: [dns-privacy] New Version Notification - draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12.txt
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On Wed, Apr 20, 2022 at 4:57 AM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

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> A new version (-12) has been submitted for draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12.txt
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> The IETF datatracker page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic/
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> Diff from previous version:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dprive-dnsoquic-12
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> IETF Secretariat.
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Minor nits:

In 5.1.1. Draft Version Identification
In the example "doq-i00"
Where does the "i" come from?  I was expecting "doq-00".

5.5.  Session Resumption and 0-RTT

Next to last paragraph, "errros" -> "errors"


6.3.  Address Validation

The end of the first paragraph "to a factor 3."  -> "to a factor of 3."

-- 
Bob Harold

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