Re: [dns-privacy] Alissa Cooper's Discuss on draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-10: (with DISCUSS)

[Sara Dickinson <[e-mail]>]

Hi All, 

Version -11 has the following changes which I hope address Alissa’s DISCUSS and Ben’s most recent comments:

* Rework text of 6.1.2. item 5 and update example DROP
* Improve text around use of normative language
* Fix section 5.1.3.2 bullets
* Improve text in 6.1.2. item 2.
* Various editorial improvements

Best regards

Sara. 



> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the DNS PRIVate Exchange WG of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Recommendations for DNS Privacy Service Operators
>         Authors      : Sara Dickinson
>                           Benno J. Overeinder
>                           Roland M. van Rijswijk-Deij
>                           Allison Mankin
> 	Filename     : draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op-11.txt
> 	Pages          : 44
> 	Date            : 2020-07-02
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document presents operational, policy, and security
>    considerations for DNS recursive resolver operators who choose to
>    offer DNS Privacy services.  With these recommendations, the operator
>    can make deliberate decisions regarding which services to provide,
>    and how the decisions and alternatives impact the privacy of users.
> 
>    This document also presents a non-normative framework to assist
>    writers of a DNS Recursive Operator Privacy Statement (analogous to
>    DNS Security Extensions (DNSSEC) Policies and DNSSEC Practice
>    Statements described in RFC6841).
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dprive-bcp-op/
> 
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> 
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> 
> 
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