[dns-privacy] Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9076 (8024)
Andrew Campling <andrew.campling@419.consulting> Tue, 09 July 2024 14:06 UTC
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From: Andrew Campling <andrew.campling@419.consulting>
To: Mukund Sivaraman <muks@mukund.org>, "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [dns-privacy] Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9076 (8024)
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Subject: [dns-privacy] Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9076 (8024)
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Out of interest, I took a look at the full sentence to understand the context of the errata report. This is the domain name in the URL that the user typed, selected from a bookmark, or chose by clicking on a hyperlink. Presumably, this is what is of interest for the eavesdropper. Based on this, I agree that chose is the correct option. As a nit though, the "for" in the second sentence really ought to be "to". ;-) Andrew -----Original Message----- From: Mukund Sivaraman <muks@mukund.org> Sent: Tuesday, July 9, 2024 8:48 AM To: Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <evyncke=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org> Cc: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>; gregchoules+rfc@googlemail.com; tjw.ietf@gmail.com; dns-privacy@ietf.org Subject: [dns-privacy] Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9076 (8024) On Tue, Jul 09, 2024 at 07:08:01AM +0000, Eric Vyncke (evyncke) wrote: > Original Text > ------------- > Primary request: > This is the domain name in the URL that the user typed, selected from > a bookmark, or chose > > Corrected Text > -------------- > Primary request: > This is the domain name in the URL that the user typed, selected from > a bookmark, or chosen Both of you appear correct in my reading. It depends on how you read the sentence. This is the domain name... selected from a bookmark or chosen.. This is ... that the user selected from a bookmark or chose.. Mukund
- [dns-privacy] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9076… RFC Errata System
- [dns-privacy] Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC… Eric Vyncke (evyncke)
- [dns-privacy] Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC… Mukund Sivaraman
- [dns-privacy] Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC… Andrew Campling