[dns-privacy] Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-dprive-rfc7626-bis-06: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 06 October 2020 06:04 UTC

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COMMENT:
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[[ questions ]]

[ section 6.1.1.1 ]

* Does "Strict DoT" have a definition somewhere?  I couldn't find one
  in 8499 nor in 7858.


[[ nits ]]

[ section 1 ]

* "sent in clear", consider perhaps: "sent in the clear"

[ section 4.1 ]

* "those transaction" -> "those transactions"

[ section 6.1.1 ]

* "to limited subset" -> "to a limited subset"

[ section 6.1.3 ]

* "know to be used" -> "known to be used"